[ALBUM] Daddy Warbuck$ - The d-ck Dastardly EP

Started by ccssww621, Oct 2, 2022, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Inland Empire Rapper
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    Inland Empire Rapper My Life, Your Entertainment

    Oct 13, 2022
    wannabe Eminem so embarrassed that he deleted his album off Soundcloud, no one will miss it anyways.
     
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  2. ccssww621
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    ccssww621 Shady taught me.

    Oct 13, 2022
    are you r-----ed? or paying attention to the thread at all? i pride myself on rhyming like em fam, thank you for the complement. and fyi both of my albums are on yt (csw621) and soundcloud. the track links in op go directly to the track pages on soundcloud. idk why i can’t link to the soundcloud playlists directly but my soundcloud page with both playlists is right here soundcloud.com/your-boy-daddy-warbucks
     
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  3. FiveOh1
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    Oct 13, 2022
    I just want to say like one thing real quick. You’ve called basically everyone that’s replied to you a r----- or some word or another similar.
    That’s not a good way to get people to help you out of give more feedback or a want to listen to future projects.
     
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  4. ccssww621
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    ccssww621 Shady taught me.

    Oct 13, 2022
    wow. i think this is the first occasion i ever heard someone on here speak about the importance of posting with tact and courtesy. i become so lost tryna be what these kids want i often conform to their posting styles of attacking each other and people’s work for no real reason and with no real criticism or advice, like inland empire is doing rn. also i know you recognize the fact most famous rappers today literally can’t even write a coherent sentence. i’m tryna be nice but it’s so ironic i’m on wax speaking so eloquently and rhyming so technically and building layered metaphors yet i’m being insulted by lil yachty stans so high they don’t even know what day it is and i’m expected to reply with a smile, but maybe i can learn lol
     
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  5. hargydon
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    hargydon No investigation, no right to speak

    Oct 14, 2022
    Take your meds son
     
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  6. icecube
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    Oct 14, 2022
    After reading @RipperRoo72 's feedback I was more compelled to listen. I made it all of the way through Revelations #9 and about a third of Magic before I had to shut it down. The overall quality is unlistenable. You're moaning that people are telling you to buy a better mic but that's exactly what you need to do. You've made an entire EP so you're clearly serious about this but unless you can make a project that isn't jarring to listen to them you're going to fail.

    The good points? We'll, there's only one really. Admittedly your ability to pen rhymes is quite good. But please don't grab onto that and say "thank you for your feedback, I know this blah blah blah". It doesn't matter because everything else is a---.

    The bad points?
    You're overemphasizing every syllable to make it so painfully clear that you're rhyming multi syllables. It just sounds like you're rapping after recovering from a stroke.

    Audio quality of your vocals is by far the worst thing and ultimately what made me turn it off. Seriously, invest in some decent hardware and decent mixing software if you're even 60% serious about this and wanting to improve.

    The Em biting is so cringe. f--- off with throwing a kitchen sink at someone. Wtf man. Em can get away with s--- like this because he's been in the game for 20+ years and earned his stripes. Not you. When people say you need to get inspiration from other rappers, they don't mean Lil Yachty or some s--- like that. There are plenty of lyrical rappers that flow like butter over beats and work with beats that are suited to them you could gain inspiration from. If you swoon over Em all the time then you're just going to be a one trick pony and we all know how his fan base has been in constant decline in recent years so now is not the time to 100% be biting Em.
     
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  7. poopdogg
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    poopdogg Retired

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  8. ccssww621
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    ccssww621 Shady taught me.

    Oct 14, 2022
    i ALMOST took this post seriously until this trademark lie. thank you for the reminder, fam

    i think while em is the current highest selling what i’ll do is buy a better mic and rhyme even more like him, being loved by jmg and the thousands of people who loved cave of wonders, and you can go on being a good little audience member and not a creator, being loved by m solo and wreckless. but thank you for listening!
    :khaled2:
     
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  9. Sign Language
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    Oct 14, 2022
    Imagine asking for feedback and then shi--ing on everyone who gives it honestly
    :lmaooo::lmaooo::lmaooo::lmaooo:
     
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  10. BIGFOOT
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    BIGFOOT More than a myth!

    Oct 14, 2022
    After listening to the album front to back I think it's a solid project. Great rhyming skills taken to the next level.
     
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  11. ccssww621
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    ccssww621 Shady taught me.

    Oct 14, 2022
    telling me you notice i can’t afford a mic and i sound like the guy i’m trying to sound like and i don’t write to a beat isn’t really the kind of feedback i expected but thank you for the reply fam
     
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  12. JayDeezNutz
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    OP is r-----ed.
     
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  13. Sign Language
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    Sign Language We miss you Screw

    Oct 14, 2022
    "I'm mad because I didnt get the kind of feedback I wanted"

    Lmao dont post your music if you cant handle being called out for recording on an Xbox 360 mic and trying to bite Eminem
     
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  14. hargydon
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    hargydon No investigation, no right to speak

    Oct 14, 2022
    It’s not the feedback he wanted but it’s definitely the feedback he needed.
     
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    Oct 14, 2022
    Really don't get the hate tbh. CSW is a vet on here and made a tasteful tribute to Marshall. Mic sounds great too

    You lames wish you ran the Em sxn like he does!
     
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  16. JayDeezNutz
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    Stfu soy boy.
     
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  17. JayDeezNutz
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    fa----
     
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  18. Feminem
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    Stfu you rap in Polish. No one listens to that crap unless they are a communist

    Leave CSW alone!
     
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  19. JayDeezNutz
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    I don't rap at all, you got me confused yikes
     
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  20. Feminem
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    Wrap my d-ck in yo a---
     
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