DEATH WISH - JMG (EXCLUSIVE RICK JAMES DISS)

Started by JMG, May 22, 2020 at 3:31 PM, in Music Add to Reading List

  1. JMG
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    JMG

    1, 2.. marcin, im coming for you

    May 22, 2020 at 9:25 PM
    i dont think it was fair excuse. considering he rapped in polish in the chyper. maybe it wasn't even him though.. dude could of just took it from a friends Soundcloud or something. hmm something to look into.. anyways yes it was a slaughter..i actually knew polish before this..along with 15 other languages
     
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    May 22, 2020 at 9:39 PM
    prove it fakket
     
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    May 22, 2020 at 9:41 PM
    that's how pusha t beat drake so i guess its realistic?
     
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    May 22, 2020 at 9:44 PM
    dude doesn't have Asperger's, just head-up-ass syndrome.
     
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    "The Cool Cats" - The Lith-Meister

    May 23, 2020 at 4:26 AM
    Jesus christ my ears. Get a ghost writer bruh
     
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  6. JulnHT
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    May 23, 2020 at 5:53 AM
    So @Grimace coming at me too.
    Let’s see, if I going to do this
     
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  7. JMG
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    1, 2.. marcin, im coming for you

    May 23, 2020 at 6:53 AM
    Nah u need to pay more attention.. lots of qoutables. I'm gonna break the bars down in a new video coming later.
     
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  8. the kid on mars
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    May 23, 2020 at 8:08 AM
    As a genuine constructive form of critisim, I'd maybe take some of the length out of the bars. For example:

    stop fronting everyone knows you lame as hell
    cant finish what you started, i guess you are dave chappelle


    Becomes

    stop fronting, you're lame as hell
    cant finish what you started, like dave chappelle


    Just makes it feel more impactful. Even the lines that are great seem too spaced out as there's too much padding inbetween the rhymes. And also including some more wrenched rhymes would make it more impressive.
     
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  9. Koolo
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    SAS IS THE NEW KANYE

    May 23, 2020 at 8:23 AM
    This is better than blck boy
     
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    SAS IS THE NEW KANYE

    May 23, 2020 at 8:26 AM
    The polish touch was way too good
     
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    1, 2.. marcin, im coming for you

    May 23, 2020 at 8:54 AM
    i def dont need advice on how to rap from a sped.. especially when i dropped verse of the year..
     
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    May 23, 2020 at 9:02 AM
    You delusional f--k. It was genuinely horrendous. Not even insulting you, it was really, really bad and that's just facts. I did better on the spot.
     
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    1, 2.. marcin, im coming for you

    May 23, 2020 at 9:05 AM
    go back and read ur last post.. u said "the great lines" ... and that garbage about putting a fatchick in plastic magic tragic style is outdated.. try copying someone besides eminem.
     
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    May 23, 2020 at 9:07 AM

    You keep saying I copy people but you still can't provide examples. Yes, the lines would be great if you shortened the lines. I wasn't even going at you, I was giving you constructive feedback. You can't rap dude. I'm sorry.
     
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  15. JMG
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    1, 2.. marcin, im coming for you

    May 23, 2020 at 9:09 AM
    yeah then why am i getting pm's from producers asking me to record a demo? my verse may end up trending on twitter too.. i dont need to provide examples.. ur shitty verse was 99 eminem
     
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    May 23, 2020 at 9:11 AM
    So eminem when he was genuinely incredible? Nobody is asking you for demos. Jesus christ. I've never encountered somebody as delusional as you. I am stunned constantly by your ability to create a self image of brilliance. You must have a really sad life
     
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    May 23, 2020 at 9:34 AM
    :lmaooo:
     
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    1, 2.. marcin, im coming for you

    May 23, 2020 at 9:39 AM
    nothing sad about my life.. its a nice beautiful sunny day here in south Florida. my son is watching cartoons, after a bomb ass breakfast. we're gonna go bike riding later which will bring me great joy. thats the type of happiness you cant match. however looking at your posts u sound like a depressed recluse who is jealous of how happy and successful i am.
     
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    May 23, 2020 at 10:15 AM
    When you're done with Rick James, if you win, I dare you to come for me. Same wager. Loser leaves forum for good.
     
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    Pick A Side

    May 23, 2020 at 10:26 AM
    Do u record as well?
     
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