Deep rap song inspired by Em's "Rock Bottom" (Subject Wise)

Started by MrHaych, Sep 8, 2019, in Eminem Add to Reading List

  1. MrHaych
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    Sep 8, 2019

    I'd also love to hear people's thoughts on this track !!
     
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  2. The Real Slim Shady
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    Sep 8, 2019
    I liked it mate, keep going.

    Good to hear that UK accent too, was 100% expecting an American haha
     
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  3. MichaelsMad
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    Sep 9, 2019
    nice to hear someone rap on E-Man beats, hes a solid producer. pretty solid man. mixing isn't bad either. you mix it yourself?
     
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  4. MrHaych
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    Sep 9, 2019
    He sure is bro! And i send my stuff to an engineer man, he always kills it!
     
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  5. Rafael Picon
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    I'm a blonde Dre, now gimme Kanye's glasses!

    Sep 9, 2019
    sounds like denace, but i like, keep it up
     
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  6. MichaelsMad
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    Sep 10, 2019
    I got 2 tracked out beats I leased from him that I'm sitting in right now, I've talked to him a few times hes a good dude. It's cool seeing what you did to that beat, bc I had listened to it several times and never got that vibe from it, then I hear your song and I see. It's cool seeing how other ppl approach beats. Your pass out track is also pretty dope man. You were in the pocket on that beat
     
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  7. joeyp363
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    Sep 10, 2019
    Constructive criticism: you have some work to do. Better than a lot of SoundCloud shit but woofta don’t quit your day job just yet.
     
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  8. Rick
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    Sep 11, 2019
    You're trying to sound like Eminem and that's ummm... Nah. You can rap, but that's not it chief. Being copycat isn't good road to walk. I wish you all good tho.
     
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