FEEDBACK On My New Song

Started by MACKAVON, Feb 25, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

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    MACKAVON (MACKAVON)

    Feb 25, 2016

    Did a freeverse on The Game's song "On Me"
    I love beats with vocal samples so this one was calling to me :)
    Please tell me what you think about my flow, cuz I sent one of my old songs to this blog and they said my flow needed some improving but I had some real potential. I personally think the flow on my old song was good but I admit it was a bit basic.
    Any other constructive criticism is appreciated! And if you like the song please say so
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Feb 26, 2016
    I think I remember liking something else you've posted here before, maybe it was the track you mentioned in your post here? Anyways, liked this quite a bit.
     
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    Feb 26, 2016
    That was probably my music video Menace II Society, a lot of ppl were feeling that in here apparently. Glad you like this joint tho!
     
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    Feb 27, 2016
    Awesome!! Near-professional. Nice flow. Sounds a little bit like p---- C with a modern flow. Your voice might be even better if you can get it a little deeper (like maybe with a 8% deeper pitch sound effect.)
     
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    Feb 27, 2016
    Thanks for the feedback! I rather not use the pitch effect but I am training my voice to be able to do different pitches, a lot of rappers do this actually. Such as K. Dot himself.
     
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    Feb 27, 2016
    :sweatt: Your flow

    @MikeyTheRapper Good job fam
     
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    Feb 27, 2016
    Ayee respect, I definitely been working on my flow
     
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    Feb 27, 2016
    @ me next time u drop a song b
     
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    Feb 28, 2016
    I got you fosho fam
     
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