[FINAL TRACK] 13. make sounds

Started by Narsh, Oct 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Oct 25, 2015
    It's fire haha I just wish it was slower TBH too fast for my taste
     
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Oct 25, 2015
    I have some catching up to do :wow:

    i'll post my thoughts in a little later
     
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  5. Narsh
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    Oct 26, 2015
    tomorrows one of my personal favorites :allears:

    adieu, i do, i do
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Oct 26, 2015
    almost @ the end m8s.
    12. adieu (i do)

    one of my personal favorite tracks. the last 45ish seconds is like my favorite thing ive ever done, idk..the way the singing/auto tune melded to create those sounds/vibe. :allears: Also really love the "Im lookin up at the moon in love" bit. :allears:
    hope you guys dig it
    torn rose on the floor and more i see through flares of all your evening stares
    sunlight shining there and where were you when i had moves to grow
    and strewn my truth along the coast
    i almost feel sorry i didnt mean to say that
    aint patient just bold and since boast and got penchant for pendants and painting the truth as a hoax

    i bid you adieu, i do

    coming off of a binge i got karma in me
    the light has tinted be ideology
    i am the vengeance violent needs
    im candid my candor aint planned it im free

    fantastic this banter
    the static my mantra
    im chandler im joey im ross at a loss ya

    all my friends since been b------s
    im pensive and petty
    im sure im like betty

    can’t write for a second ‘fore lightening come wrecks it
    i aint trying make sense but the clarity enters
    i bid you adieu cause you stared through december
    not sayin a word but whats worse was the measure
    of intellect it took shun me forever
    mommy whats pleasure
    finding its difficult
    that i can tell ya
    fella
    memorabilia medical
    an L ill evaporate
    cannot stay from the haze
    felt the roof
    crumble from pressure
    plunge into better
    found plunder in endings
    and this just beginnings

    i bid you adieu, i do

    coming off of a binge im on toxins again
    all of this chalk it to uppers and SWIM
    swimming in meds
    someone i met
    remain anonymous
    remain anonymous

    someone i met
    remain anonymous

    dont tell their name
    or call it quits
    dont tell their kids
    help hide their frame
    dont rip their reins
    be diligent everyone got their own pain
    place pics in place
    pictures in frame
    dont sip the same

    this is so fire i called all my friends
    to tell em im rappin im rappin like them
    rapping like him following trends ugh
    i just realized what i mightve just said
    f---, im trapped in this pit
    up, lazarus lift
    me

    im bane of existing
    and cane is whats missing
    im able to sniff things
    they aint gonna miss me
    its nifty im nuclear
    and imma s---t em up
    and in the veins in my veins
    imma s---t em up
    im up lookin @ the moon in love
    im lookin all at the moon in love
    i got the lunar lunacy

    tho all my dawgs they act new to me ay
    those are my dawgs thought they knew its me ay
    i thought i thought they knew its me ay
    but they act knew to me oi
    neuter em neuter em ay
    tell em now tell em now tell em now ay
    that we aint play, that we aint play
    f--- what you say
    ay


    i bid u adieu i do i do
    @Jehovah @FreeAgent @Packman @Fire Squad @yeezyfan11 @Nuredin B @Astro @Michael Myers @JG2 @Oliver Queen @red rum @El Duderino @DetroitSkills @ThyNeighbour @Marduk @ThatAwkwardGuy @Jet just realized @Bleed has missed this entire thread =O​
     
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Oct 26, 2015
    whooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
    daily simha!!!!!!!!! love this man.
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Oct 26, 2015
    glad u like it friend
     
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    Oct 26, 2015
    Yo you wasn't kidding about the flow! It's great. Not a big fan of the "i do i do" part but that last one with the autotune was pretty good. Reminded of Thug's "With That" a lil bit. Overall, a pretty dope track.
     
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    dont see the with that comparison tbh haha, but im glad u f--- with ittt :sweatt:
     
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    Astro ASHAD SEND ME THIS!

    Oct 26, 2015
    :okthishard:
     
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

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    Count On Hope - I remember this one, awesome flow/melody throughout the verses. The hook is on some other s--- man hope you keep doing stuff like this song.

    Out Of Space - Oh h--- yeah this is the one, those opening bars :bigquint: Probably my favorite track I've ever heard from you so far.

    11th Floor - Ehh I'm not not too sold on this one honestly. I probably would have enjoyed this more if I played this by itself, hearing it after them last two fire tracks made it stick out lol.

    adieu (I do) - This one was pretty dark which you do a really good job at writing about. Really messed with that little outro as well, you can probably come up with a cool ad-lib one of these days.
     
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    i almost feel sorry, i aint mean to say thaaat
     
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  14. Narsh
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    appreciate all of the feedback man. 11th floor is like the oldest joint i record on here, there was no need for me to really force it on this tape tbh

    out of space is one of favorites too :) glad you liked it that much

    not everyone f---s with my voice on tracks like count on hope, but then some people dont even comment on it. idk, thats why i when i record i just do whatever i feel like lol and not worry too much about my delivery.

    i love the outro on adieu :allears:

    the writing on the first was of adieu was lazy and i was gonna change it but i said f--- it lol.

    only 1 track left now :ohno:
     
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    I bid you adieu, I do, I do

    Loved this when I first heard it. Mixtape almost finished :SadDrake:
     
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    Just caught up lol. 11th floor was the favorite but had to take a break after out of space because the beat and bars started with the flames...
     
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    :ohno:
    :sadnarsh:
    its weird seeing what tracks everyone is drawn to haha, theres been some consensus but also a lot of disparity. glad u dug 11th floor tho m8

    and out of space :whew:
     
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    13. make sounds

    the 2nd of 2 tracks i took from [ropes] (count on hope being the first, and tianjin being one excluded), sounds was the 2nd track on that tape. I know it was a personal favorite for @Ozy and a few others...i think its the melody and s--- in the middle, which was really just freestyled and i didnt feel like changing it or re-doing it more precisely or anything.
    this is definitely mixed differently from the [ropes] version. put like a radio effect on the whole thing.
    f--- an opp I'm off a dozen shots I'm buzzin ock/
    A f---ing muzzle on my moving mouth,
    who's in town?/
    To tear apart their area, the sirens sound/
    Signin I take out a pound,
    puff it all/
    Got a stick I call a shish-kabob/
    Pistol out, at least inside my visions found/
    Vintage sounds, sirens sirens enter now/
    Why am I gentle clown/
    Cancel out, everything I'm narnia/
    Narsh is turning simha ya/
    Ain't been ready ya/
    Tease the cost/
    Please the boss/
    You with them and I don't take a loss ya

    so tape ya mouth bruh
    To Make it out
    Don't make a sound
    Amazing how they see the town
    And feel profound but then turn it down
    Simple nouns like where we are
    And where the stars start staring down
    In the dead of night the streets surmount
    To playgrounds hey now hold it down
    May cost canines comin around
    The weed is loud the neighbors soft
    Hear me out the here and now
    Clearing out what I allow
    paramount is my allowance
    High above the halos how
    A life once living lavish found
    Out and down
    Ravished now tattered blouse
    Lady justice languishing
    Laughing loud are sounds of ours
    Delusional to our own cause
    I'm just take you out a boss
    I've been up & I've been down, ay
    I'm rambling like I'm mighty proud
    I'm might boy im Mighty Mouse
    they mini I'm a bigger boss
    Conceited like a b---- absolved
    Of growing up to take that mirror down
    Bishops pounce on knights across the table
    Down and under
    Round amount of packages get traded thousands
    Get inflated how

    I never knew and dont wanna find out
    I never knew and never wanted to find out
    I got you by myself and I got you right now
    I'm coming off the dome she's coming to my house
    She's comin my way and we make sounds
    We make sounds sounds sounds sound sounds
    The view from here is nice can't come down
    The view from here is nice can't come down
    I say you like me, girl you like me
    You like me girl? You like me?
    I haven't seen u since the world got frightening

    A couple grand and grams in separate sacks
    a couple a stacks to Uncle Sam
    A couple ran from Buckingham to somewhere more affordable
    A double date a dozen stares I let it marinate in air
    I'm aware my minds a maze a lair for grace to disappear
    Etches etched like withered wares
    Tattered sketches never there
    What was once ephemeral'll cease to have a heavy hold
    So they told rest his soul more evolve as more uphold
    All the hope all alone till mamma maybe calls my phone
    Memories they enter me
    My premium entity
    My permeable membrane molded mentally
    Meant to be mesmerizing
    But instead a mess to see
    Let him be and behold
    A weakening willow tree
    Used to whip ferociously
    Now my leaves are losing potency
    Pouring me a potion
    poet partly pleasing penances
    Purgatory where he ought to be
    Purchasing more rights to just be
    Entitled while eyes cant see
    That he ain't vital vying just for relevancy
    Revel in the severed sanctity
    this has been really great guys, i sincrely appreciate anyone who stucked around for the whole thing (ur my best frans) or anyone who goes back and checks these tracks out later and plays catch up (ur real 1s too). :beaut:
    lets rejoice in da sounds instead of being upset it's over. VOL. 2 coming sooner than ya think. w/ hooks and s--- u digg what im sayin. :whistling:
    love u again
    :wub:
    :hugs:
    @Jehovah @FreeAgent @Packman @Fire Squad @yeezyfan11 @Nuredin B @Astro @Michael Myers @JG2 @Oliver Queen @red rum @El Duderino @DetroitSkills @ThyNeighbour @Marduk @ThatAwkwardGuy @Jet @Bleed

    glad this s--- was successful
    :heart2:
     
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    It's over :sadpepe:
     
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    Really enjoyed this. Was nice looking back on songs I've heard and had yet to hear.
     
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