First beat in a while

Started by Relax, Feb 3, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Relax
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    Feb 3, 2017


    Check out this track? Made it in like an hour after deciding to try beat making again. Any tips?
     
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  2. Relax
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    Feb 3, 2017
    Love the creative sxn
     
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  3. Cunner
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    Cunner belter skelter

    Feb 3, 2017
    whose man picked those kicks
     
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  4. Sterling
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    Sterling Psychic Spy In Training

    Feb 4, 2017
    Listening on my phone so feedbacks limited to what i can actually hear. The drums are tight rhythm wise, I actually really like them, kick sounds hard but the snare sounds a little hollow to me. That's just personal preference though.

    The piano chords are a nice foundation but I feel like there could have been a bit more of a melody. Maybe some light strings in the background to compliment it, or possibly some brass.

    Couldn't pick out a bass line on my phone but the low piano fills the bottoms end nicely so i didn't really miss it.

    It's a nice base man, I'd definitely build on it a bit.
     
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  5. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Feb 4, 2017
    agree w/ what Sterling said^

    will say tho that that synth you're using sounds a little cheap, i'd try changing that
     
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