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Started by papadope, Jan 8, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 8, 2017
    So I enter 2017 with something new and different. I'll be glad if you give me some feedback. This track is much influenced by art, philosophy and literature. I consider it to be performed poetry, at least, that's how I wanted to approach it.
    I did some singing and I would like to heavily comment on it.

    Here's the song:


    The lyrics on Genius:
    https://genius.com/Papadpe-the-city-of-no-remorse-a-beksinski-painting-lyrics
     
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  2. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 8, 2017
    BUMP
     
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  3. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 8, 2017
    @CreativeSXN
     
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  4. Bandz Lance
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    Bandz Lance new name same don

    Jan 8, 2017
    Your mic is off-point as h---.
     
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  5. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 8, 2017
    that's a sad truth
     
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  6. Deadpool
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    Deadpool the end

    Jan 8, 2017
    yea get a better mic fam
     
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  7. Michael Myers
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    Michael Myers Moderator

    Jan 8, 2017
    Nice beat/vibe not gonna lie

    Voice sounds bad like this tho can't understand a word
     
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  8. Pinocchio
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    Pinocchio

    Jan 8, 2017
    Trash mic, but good stuff
     
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  9. Jacuzzi
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    Jacuzzi

    Jan 8, 2017
    Yeah mic quality is a obvious flaw. I love the instrumental and it's very well done, but I aslo think the vocal style and direction is in too big of a contrast to the beat. I think your style might fit some industrial dark sounding beats better. Beat tells me it's a sweet a--- summer night, while vocals tells me I'm at a satanic ritual., if you see what I'm getting at lmao. While I don't mind either, they just don't mash that well together, in my opinion.

    I definitely think this is cool, and it's not unlistenable at all, but I'd definitely focus on getting a better mic. That's the most glaring issue at the moment.
     
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  10. Bandz Lance
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    Bandz Lance new name same don

    Jan 8, 2017

    Here's one of my beats that fit the tone, with the backwards sample and all.
     
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  11. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Jan 8, 2017
    bro..what's going on with your vocals? this a rough demo or sumn?
     
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  12. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 9, 2017
    Hey guys, thank y'all for giving this a listen, I appreciate your interest.
    I know I must upgrade my equipment. I'm glad I got some positive comments, it's a song that I put imuch effort in its writing
     
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  13. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 9, 2017
    No it's not, fam
     
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  14. That One Blind Kid
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    That One Blind Kid I need drugs

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  15. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Jan 9, 2017
    well yeah, is hold off on releasing anything else until you get your mixing down pack. no way anyone is gonna replay this honestly
     
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  16. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 9, 2017
    that was some useful feedback

    prob, that's what i'll do. thanks for your time
     
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  17. Future Vandross
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    Future Vandross

    Jan 9, 2017
    first tip: change your name
     
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  18. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 9, 2017
    will switch to papadope (instead of PaPaDØPe) soon. but why should I change?
     
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  19. Future Vandross
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    Future Vandross

    Jan 9, 2017
    imagine you blow up and everyone bumping your s---. lets say im playing it and my mate asks me what the name of the song is. i be like "yo this papadope new song" lmao.
    I don't know man, i dont like it. Doesn't sound professional, if you're really serious about music. Nobody gonna sign a guy named papadope.
    You wanted my honest feedback ^. I'd say song is alright in general even tho i rarely listen to that type of music, but oh well.
     
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  20. papadope
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    papadope

    Jan 9, 2017
    it was a really good friend who loved that name. it may sound stupid and sometimes it does to me, but well, i dont know. anyways thank for telling this, and thanks for your time to listen and comment too, i really appreciate that
     
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