Production Give me some feedback.

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  1. Bandz Lance
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    Bandz Lance new name same don

    Jan 8, 2017
    @CreativeSXN give me some feedback on some tracks I made recently.





    Just quote or refer to the track and tell me your thoughts.
     
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    liked for Christmas in Harlem sample
     
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    Bandz Lance new name same don

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    Expression Of Light, I felt like this was a little too wonky. Like the CIH sample is a little off-beat sometimes. May have to revisit sometime in the future.
     
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    yeah the speed on it seems a bit off, not too noticeable tho. Its chopped very well tho
     
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    Bandz Lance new name same don

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    don't know bout that. sometimes the drums are really off beat, someone like me would notice.
     
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    yeah maybe just fade out the sample after a while and introduce something new. not to good at sampling in general so I cant help that much
     
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    Bandz Lance new name same don

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    Got it. Any other songs to talk about?
     
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    Jan 9, 2017
    yo man

    i liked the mixing on the first track, the contrast in volumes provides a cool sorta lo-fi effect.

    the second track had nice atmosphere, but my only gripe with it was that it could've use a little 'variation' with instruments. drums are pre cool tho

    third one is pretty much same as my opinion of the second one. cool atmosphere but feels like you could switch it up a little.

    fourth one might be my favourite due to its tempo and energy, kind of feels dragged on a bit towards the end, but thats just my opinion.

    i can feel that the last one has a lot of potential, and i love the instruments in it, but perhaps switching up the drums every now and then could give it a bit more 'pizzaz' or however you pronounce it.

    all in all i like your work man, and i'll be sure to keep an eye out for your future works. peace.
     
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