Mar 28, 2016 my first review for HipHopDX http://hiphopdx.com/reviews/id.2670/title.young-thug-slime-season-3#comment-widget honestly...i have a version that like 200 words longer but reads a lot better. i dont understand the obsession with cutting things down so much, especially if it hurts the point im trying to make but w/e. hope you guys like it. @ThuggerSXN
Mar 28, 2016 Because with journalism, usually if you can say the same thing in less words you should. The audience for a general review is "rap fans" not "thug stans." It will help you a lot to not get so attached to portions of your writing. I know it's hard but there's a reason the writer/editor dynamic exists. Anyway I read the draft last night, will read the final in a few!
Mar 28, 2016 yeah but read the draft in the PMs and tell me that isnt better than the final version lol. and it was only the diff b/w 600 vs 800 words u kno? not like i was tryin do my usual essays haha
Mar 28, 2016 just going by their scale they had barter 6 at a 4, and im up at a 3.5 and this is definitely better than the latter but worse than the former
Mar 28, 2016 What? 7.6 is a good score. Plus HHDX is a real website so I'm sure they helped dictate his score to their standards somewhat.
Mar 28, 2016 by their scale it would be (for me): tha tour pt 1 - 5.0 barter 6 - 4.3 ss1 - 4.0 ss2 - 3.8 im up - 3.5 ss3 - 3.8
Mar 28, 2016 tip: you shouldnt write sentences more then maybe 10-12 words. this is an ok review but ur first sentence isnt dynamic enough and is a run on. im guilty of this too but something to keep in mind.
Mar 28, 2016 SS2 definitely not better than SS1. B6 & SS1 is very close though. SS3 is underated by Narsh imo.
Mar 28, 2016 hah i didnt. i try to show @Narsh tuff love sometimes. it may come off as mean, but my heart is in the right place like, narsh this is a 600 word review and ur first sentence is over 30 words.you can see how thats poor utilization
