Aug 16, 2016 Wassup section.eighteyy? Dropped a new track today, got bars on it this time, didn't produce this one but rapping over my own beats is next for me, this is just something I've had planned out for a bit but never recorded... Lemme know your thoughts, do you like it, is it tolerable? nothing special? f---ing s---? lemme know!! I will be forever grateful to you and this beautiful community of a forum! @CreativeSXN
Aug 16, 2016 Its pretty cool, i love tracks this chill. If i could give you some criticism. At parts you sounds like you were reading off a page. Try to do a few punch ins, learn each bar off by heart & deliver the lines in a natural tone. Other than that, this is pretty great!
Aug 20, 2016 AHahah thanks yeahh the bits that would have sounded like that would have been the parts I made last minute changes to! appreciate the feedback though! will keep in mind for sure!! Glad you liking homie @Feedback this song is sonically pleasing imo, but it feels pretty average on some level, what do you think it is if so? Weak hook? unfocused theme? Some unbiased opinions would do me 100. I will forever be in your debt! also happy to listen to your stuff if u have any!
