Dec 3, 2014

Hi guys,

Saw this beautiful thread with rappers sharing their songs so I couldn't wait to share mine! Hope you guys like it. If you have any feedback please share it with me because that's how I can improve myself.

 

Dec 27, 2014

Wow how has no one responded to this? Your stuff reminds me of Mos Def or Lupe, like it gives off that vibe yknow. Did you produce this as well?

 

Dec 27, 2014

the first song i like ever recorded was to this LaLaLa beat..safe to say your s--- is better than mine was hahah

You got a good voice, just wasn't feeling the way you were pronouncing some s--- - but that doesn't mean you should change, it worked regardless. Some of the writing seems a bit lazy and when the flow is slower like this it's easier to notice this s---

but it's pretty good man, imma follow u sc

 

Dec 27, 2014

can't listen to this beat without think of la la la la by M.I.C

pretty decent though, flow could be a bit more polished here and there but apart from that this s--- is pretty dope

 

Dec 28, 2014

Thanks for the feedback guys! I still have to work on my wordplay, flow and pronouncing. I'm from The Netherlands so I talk Dutch and not Englisch so I hope it´s decent enough haha. Although I still work on it. I took a break from Rap because I´m working with a DJ right now on stage and try to be that annoying guy screaming through the mic through the set. Maybe I´ll write some now stuff in the next couple weaks.