Jul 8, 2017 I like the video. Not really a fan of suburban comedy raps. Maybe don't include those weak ad libs in the future. You could mix/deliver them differently or just write your lines out to lessen the dead air. Doesn't really feel like a finished song. Just a short verse and the chorus is kind of an outro. The chorus is also a lot more serious than the verse. Anyways, thanks for posting. Hope you take my feedback as constructive.
Jul 9, 2017 I feel you entirely. This was something short I did as I continue to finish up my sophomore mixtape, and it kind of suffered as a result. I wrote the chorus and then had a buddy of mine preform it for me; the verse was something I'd had for a while and then tweaked to fit the chorus thematically. Altogether I'm proud of it but I wouldn't say it's one of my best works. Thank you for listening and even more for posting your thoughts! It is appreciated.
