Jan 28, 2016 anyways basically what @Jet said this was the main song where i was talking about the mixing in that PM
Jan 29, 2016 you too haha its just i like a quick turnaround so i end up just doing things haphazardly myself but hey, we can all agree the mixing is getting better tho. a lot of recent tracks are my best mixes to date a couple do slip through the cracks tho yeah i feel you, thanks for the feedback then/now with a grand total of 2 response, i cant wait to post my 2nd track! lmao but hey, as long there's even 1 person listening out there its worth it man even if no one listens, making music is still such an incredible feeling
Jan 31, 2016 2. LOOK @ her This was a completely different song at first and the hook was so bad lol. Took a good amount of work to get it to sound like it does. I actually like the hook now lol. I feel like the songs main appeal is from how its mixed/how it sounds -- because its hard to really distinguish the verses or whats even going on in the 2nd one (purposefully tried to obscure it like that). Look @ her (icecoldtears) hook: Just look at her then look at me you know this love too true to be just look at her, look at me you know she see right thru the seams x2 just look at her, just look at her x4 Just look at her then look at me you know this love too true to be just look at her, look at me you know she see right thru the seams x2 verse 1: im riding round the neighborhood im feeling like i felt that day im riding but i know i should be on my knees so i can pray im riding like im riding for a team but i play for myself im riding but aint writing so this s--- can't be too good for health should i sell should i meld my soul for sale in whole for gold i bought a belt i bought myself a couple watches winter will turn my mold into ice im dripping i dont got a vice trophies they sit on top my shelf i never wanted nothing else hook: Just look at her then look at me you know this love too true to be just look at her, look at me you know she see right thru the seams x2 just look at her, just look at her x4 verse 2: ..you know my heart not broken its been broken but you had it fixed all of it so proud of you brain so good got scholarships a college kid thats all i is and that aint mean too much at all you were a dream you are a call a call to arms that i ignored i bought a wraith i bought a beam in my dreams i am livin large normalcy aint comfortable for me no no not all so sorry see im ornery i got no room for frivolity thats all this is and soon you'll see im beating you str8 to the punch i wanted her she wanted me but i got drugs i wanna stuff down my throat i swallow much except the truth, a hollow bluff just look at her then look at me you'll see that there aint much to see @SIMHAsxn
Jan 31, 2016 so sorry see im ornery i got no room for frivolity thats all this is and soon you'll see
Jan 31, 2016 no worries, most people did mine used to be resevoir, lillies, and u seem sad but look @ her is getting up there haha glad you like it :hug:
Jan 31, 2016 main thing I noticed was the lack of breath control like some parts of the hook, other than that, I like how you're gliding over the beat for the whole song so the not being able to hear you was on purpose? should at least turn the vocals up like on the verses some, but I f---s with this
Feb 2, 2016 yeah this guy uses a lot of familiar samples lol i wouldnt be surprised if that was it...my roommate noticed like 3 different ones throughout the tape first time he heard it
Feb 2, 2016 3. i fed ur prada to the sea this one shouldnt need an explanation. apparently @Final's favorite song of mine. @SIMHAsxn
Feb 2, 2016 nah man my mind be bipolar my momma said im extra awesome so smooth. love how you just glide over the beat
