Moi Cherie by Tadpole

Started by King Tadpole, Oct 21, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. King Tadpole
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    King Tadpole

    Arizona Sky LP by Tadpole

    Oct 21, 2015
    http://picosong.com/6qTi/

    It's not just a farce anymore
    Shadows have swallowed me raw
    Pages of darkest grimoires
    What are these caracasses for
    Business has no remorse
    Cut you off if your short
    Stuff you up in the vault
    Take you out in the morgue
    Phantoms they follow me
    Faces grieve so sallowly
    An experience harrowing
    The dark winds they swallow me

    Dig it back up again
    Reanimated from the dead
    Shovel to your head
    Something you gon' dread
    Straggling a lot my dear?
    Took cold for this atmosphere
    You're just a living corpse
    Shrouded in fear.
     
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  2. Cyreides
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    Cyreides

    gfy

    Oct 22, 2015
    Vocals need to be mixed in better, and I think your delivery could still use a little work at times. You should really upload in like full kbps quality tho
     
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