[MUSIC VIDEO] Out in Hawaii so I had to s---t a lil video for my TLOP Freestyle

Started by ghodsy, Apr 21, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. ghodsy
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    Apr 21, 2016
    When you're out in a dope place, you gotta do some dope s---

    Hit me up with some feedback!



    EDIT

    And peep my new track! Playing with some new flows. Figure I'll throw it in here instead of making a new thread

     
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  2. Pato v3
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    Apr 21, 2016
    Video is dope

    I don't think your rapping fits well with the beat
     
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  3. ghodsy
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    Apr 22, 2016
    Thanks homie, I'll take it. It was a fun little freestyle to do so that's fair
     
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  4. Narsh
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    Apr 24, 2016
    opposite of pato, i thought the freestyle was dope. better than i thought it would be for sure

    video is cool but obviously not professional or anything
     
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  5. Creation
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    Apr 28, 2016
    The video is cool, the song with a bit better mixing & mastering would be great :)
     
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  6. TheMCommander
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    Apr 29, 2016
    I agree, the mixing throws some parts off, and is really pulling down the freestyle
     
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  7. CSW
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    Apr 29, 2016
    very well put together video. pretty much agree with the other comments. rhymes are great for a freestyle
     
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  8. ghodsy
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    May 5, 2016
    Always appreciate feedback so let me get to everyone...
    And if ya were into it, check out my new track, released today


    h--- yea, appreciate it. Video and song were fun to put together and i'm pumped that it turned out pretty dope.

    Yo, for real, I feel it. I paid three different guys to mix the track and they came back with less than stellar mixes (asked a number of people who agreed). The final product is a mix I put together, which is decent, but I don't know where to upgrade and if I'm gonna have to shell out $100 or something.

    Thanks homie, freestyles are always a good time throwing together... Real struggle is quality, content songs
     
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  9. Creation
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    This is really great man, fantastic work!
     
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  10. CSW
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    May 5, 2016
    new track is incredibly dope
     
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  11. ghodsy
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    May 6, 2016
    Thanks yo, always appreciate the love on new music

    sweet man, glad you're digging the style. we'll see where it develops
     
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