One for the homies, hope you vibe to it :) -dedicated to old school hip hop

Started by ceepapz, May 8, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. ceepapz
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    May 8, 2017
    Hey guys so I've dropped a new song on soundcloud, much better produced than my previous ones and I'd love any criticism/feedback for it. Hope you guys enjoy, and feel free to link me any of your stuff so I can check it out :). (prefer old school hip hop though as you can tell by the thread name haha).

    Song is about chilling with the homies, hope you guys enjoy it :)
     
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  2. 1999
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    May 8, 2017
    Stop looking for things to rhyme and say something of worth. Also rappers with Australian accents are usually trash but yours isn't very bad, kinda dope.
     
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  3. ceepapz
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    May 8, 2017
    Cheers for the advice my dude, will take it into account. Glad you vibed with it
     
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  4. Agee Flame
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    May 11, 2017
    Ayyyy not bad man! I checked it out on that other thread and dropped a like! Though, there isn't anything that is keeping me interested in the track. You have some overdubbs, and slight delivery & flow changes, but everything sounds similar. The flow and deliveries stay the same for the most part, which gets tiring after a while.

    That's just some feedback though, I like your voice and your flow hits on beat and doesn't mess up.

    If you ever need a feature, I'd be down! My SC is here:

     
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