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Started by Reed Richards, Aug 3, 2015, in Life Add to Reading List

  1. Reed Richards
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    Reed Richards

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  2. KingDrizz
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    bruh that's a long life story, aren't you 13? anyway I mean your raps are okay for your age I guess
     
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  3. MTY
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    MTY VERY SHALLOW LISTENING

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    learn to paragraphs
     
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    Yes i am only 13 i know it is long but i am going through some tough times now so i figured i'd put it here also it was'nt really about the raps but thanks i guess.
     
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    MTY VERY SHALLOW LISTENING

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    Not surprising yet disappointing.
     
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    MTY VERY SHALLOW LISTENING

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    I got 2/3rds of the way before giving up. From there I can I feel sorry for the situation you're in @The kid, but man you gotta get better at writing or something.
     
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    It's impossible to read a block of text like that
     
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    Ok i will im not exactly sure what you mean though? Like how do i divide that into paragraphs.
     
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    MTY VERY SHALLOW LISTENING

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    Usually when you enter a different part of the story that's a good time. I've been writing for so long that knowing when to make a new paragraph comes naturally to me.

    When you start having to write papers for class you'll figure it out.
     
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    Usually when you switch subjects, or move on to another point.

    Example:
    Paragraph 1: I write about my self, and end with "I love to play football".

    Paragraph 2: Continue writing about football (what team i play for, which position etc)

    It really makes it A LOT easier to read. I didn't read your story because of this, but I hope things will get better for you!
     
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    Alright yea i get it thanks its like finish the topic each paragraph but isnt there only supposed to be 5
     
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    Not reading that huge wall of letters
     
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    nah mate, there is no maximum limit on paragraphs (i'm a teacher, and i've never heard about only 5 paragraphs). You'll probably learn about it at school soon.
     
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  14. Reed Richards
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    Oh no i have but im not exactly the smartest nor best at remembering things but i thought i remember the intro the body and the outro unless that was just for that paper
     
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    You're right about intro, body and outro. But you can have several paragraphs in the intro, and in the body and in the outro.

    Intro - Body - Outro is the easiest way to learn about paragraphs, so stick to that and try to use that for now. I'm sure your english teacher will teach you more about paragraphs soon!
     
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    good thing you're not his teacher, huh? haha

    I don't really have time to read all of this right now but i might come back to it another time. good luck to you though mate! hope things get better for you : )
     
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    I was 100% certain this was going to be a wall of text with no paragraph breaks when I saw the thread author. Use the f---ing enter key if you want people to read any of your topics.
     
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    Haha, touche'. Luckily i only teach norwegian, social science and PE.
     
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    Looking at OP's post gives me a headache. Even if you don't know where to start or end paragraphs, just seperate this s--- in smaller blocks of text.
     
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    What makes you think people wanna know your life story
     
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