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Eminem Write Your Own Eminem Verse

Started by Mikey, Sep 5, 2017, in Eminem Add to Reading List

  1. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Sep 5, 2017
    dumbed down the writing due to drug use of encore era.
     
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    i’d like to hear something resembling his 2017 rhyming if possible. like the one i posted
     
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    attila

    Sep 5, 2017
    Cringe
     
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    Cringier
     
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    i wanna see what you’re capable of
     
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    the verse i posted on the first page, i posted on hhs last year. em borrowed hella rhymes from it so he’s prolly reading this. show off bro
     
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    I will want to back hand you all next time you call em cringe worthy after reading this thread
     
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Sep 5, 2017
    Recovery style verse:

    I’m driving, like ninety on the highway
    Racing through the traffic on my way to find you
    You inspire me to write better rhymes and
    Not quit, even though I know it’s time
    Make up, I don’t want to fight
    But you look better when your face ain’t caked up
    Even though I battered you, so you tried to hide it
    By the time you had died, police thought it was suicide
    Went from Bonnie and Clyde, to running and hide
    Got it tucked against my face, put away my pride
    I’m coming for you, like it or not, and it’s like a façade
    I put up, never let down my guard, even though you
    Never played with my heart, mistake from the start
    I’ll show you, wasn’t looking for love, but I found it
    Took a few downers trying to drown it
    Relapsed and climbed out of that mountain
    Back now, till I quit, I am
     
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Sep 5, 2017
    If Eminem ever released a Goosebumps remix:

    So it’s my time to go, the show is ending ho
    Curtains close, still worth the most
    Toe the line till I’m comatose
    Think back to my overdose
    Overcame struggle with some frozen toes
    Limits, I don’t know of those
    Gone anywhere you could possibly go with flows
    Over and over again, told you hoes I’mma blow a load
    Show is over, time to go, I know
    Whoadie whoa, sit back, impossible
    The flows alive, I ain’t never gonna die
    If bullets fly, I’ll find my way revived
    Ever since the day I died
    Dre revived, brought me back to life
    Said the magic words, saved my life
    Don’t trust noone, hold a knife when I stage dive
    Thanks I’m out now, once had me a great life
    That all ended, paid the price
    Peter piper picked a pepper
    I could pick your brain and put your heart together
    Got the torch, I’m passing that to Kendrick
    That’s my revenance, I’m electric
    Signified my minds eclectic
    I’m the reverend, preaching endless
    Speaking best if you disagree get ended
    Me I’m better, nothing better than the incredible
    Shady setter, spitting eighty letters in a second
    I’m a need me a reference letter
    A trend setter, better than ever
    My best shot, I might s---t forever
    Like pew pew pew
     
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    :em55::sweatt:
     
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    :whew::whew::whew:
     
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    Walking in the dark with Jason
    While we're off medication
    Feeling crazier then the day I entered the asylum
    I love this shadier side of me
    I can say & do anything & not get in trouble for it
    cause shady has no identity
    he not real
    so time take advantage
    I'm looking for a meal feeling hungry


    ah f--- it........:sleeping2:
     
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    commit suicide imediately
     
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    when the me too strong
     
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    Ricky Hip-Hop CEO ™

    Sep 6, 2017
    They want me to go Tom Brady with top ratings,
    but I can't - so I'll go crazy with no mercy,
    k--- your baby with those hands and then go Breivik in Norway,
    k--- hundred emcees with my zany little brain, then f---in fade.
     
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    i don't see the rhymes
     
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    Ricky Hip-Hop CEO ™

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    Read it aloud
     
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    deluxe wife talkin bout bugsnax

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    Relapse? idk its not good pls be nice to me

    I decide your fate
    Mask is off inside your fireplace
    Cyanide I spray
    Run and hide while I just smile and wait
    How much time it takes? I wonder
    How long will you lie awake
    Crying as your mind and your body and your life decay
    Already done this twice today
    25 this week, a hundred and 60 victims since last May
    That's to say I've graduated way beyond my Dahmer phase
    I'm bombing everybody like I'm Kim Jong-Osama crazed
    Hide the PCP or Imma set the 313 ablaze
     
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    relapse 2

    Sep 6, 2017
    ten toes down one finger up attempting to spit a verse while puking in my tip cup dre on the beat never accepting defeat watch what you eat you mc sheet i mean s--- till midnight stuff all in you fat dike
     
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