first song i've ever released; let me know whatcha think

Started by day bit, Jun 30, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. day bit
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    Jun 30, 2015


    tell me whatcha think!
     
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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

    Jun 30, 2015
    I like it. Got a nice vibe from it.

    Check this out @Cyreides!
     
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  3. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Jun 30, 2015
    Ayeee thanks for it , but you don't gotta worry about tagging me here breh, I set myself up to get a notification anytime someone makes a thread in the sxn.:drake2:

    Will peep this when I get off work tho:khaled2:
     
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  4. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

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  5. CJ Poe
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    CJ Poe The Dark Vegan

    Jun 30, 2015
    It's not playing for me for some reason :cmpunk2:
     
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  6. bijanamir
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    bijanamir toronto till the death of me

    Jun 30, 2015
    Beat definitely overpowers your vocals when the kick / bass are at full power. And it's kinda hard to understand your vocals even when theres not any bass or kick, but the melody of the vocals and your beat is nice. Needs mastering but the idea and potential is there for sure!
     
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  7. Narsh
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    Jun 30, 2015
    Can we get in the caaaar, I don't know where we areee



    This is f---ing great, no advice from me.
    Keep doin you
    :whew:
     
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  8. Winter
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    Winter Super Comfy

    Jul 1, 2015
    Vocals could stand to be a little louder, but this is great, hope you post more music soon
     
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  9. Bains
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    Jul 2, 2015
    Gotta tell me how to do that, thats dope af
     
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  10. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Jul 2, 2015
    I just Followed the forum
     
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  11. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

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    Same here, getting noti's for when new threads are started in this section is really handy.
     
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  12. Bains
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    For sure man, looking forward to being in the loop more. As always, thank you Cyreides for the help :khaled2:
     
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  13. Bman
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    Jul 2, 2015
    DOPE! I really enjoyed it. I agree that the vocals could be a little louder. Other than that great vibes. Type of song that I would bump in the car with the crew. In fact i probably will. Not only is it a good song to smoke to, its not devoid of meaning. Which I really enjoyed. Keep it up man! Looking forward to the full tape.
     
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  14. MPURA
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    MPURA https://soundcloud.com/mpuramusic

    Jul 5, 2015
    vocals just need to be louder/ stand out more, other than that this is great
     
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  15. young king
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    Jul 8, 2015
    Perfect
     
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  16. Packman
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    Jul 8, 2015
    Great first song, you're 1 for 1 @day bit
     
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  17. Disclosure
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    Disclosure R&B Stan

    Jul 8, 2015
    f---in h--- this is a b-----r man, this could legit be a hit.

    Who produced and wrote the joint? Work on vocal quality man, I want this on my MP3 Player and in my whip [srs]
     
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  18. Disclosure
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    Disclosure R&B Stan

    Jul 8, 2015
    Make more songs you c----.

    Got this s--- on replay already :bigquint:
     
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  19. sxneighty123
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    Jul 9, 2015
    d---, I really like this. :khaled:
     
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  20. DoL
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    DoL IndieHipHopBiz

    Jul 18, 2015
    I dig it, man..
     
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