Jul 26, 2015 new track dont know if i should use this tag but oh well @CreativeSXN lyrics: i got a month i wont last anymore im finna flex on the town i got month i wont last anymore they finna forget im around i remember november with cameras traveling touring the tandem towns drifting like grifters stayed to the ground like spongebob, i remember now in the backseat with my little sis no acne i was little still we had a spill we’re relaxing still watching the tv that came down off in a dream i forget now i remember im staring out windows im remember the temperature tentative lowering im in a hole, however imma hold on to it im higher than Eiffel no tower I fell off the top i devoured the power in hour of absolute horror i borrowed the sorrow somewhere so somber cause after the driver collided my armor doubled in standard and coupled with candor my parents distraught and my sister somewhere off in some other land I sheltered mind, i felt a disguise, i looked in their eyes only once all the lies flushed out my mind and i i compromised i pretend to buy that we’d be alright the guy that was the behind the wheel now had died My sis was alive, my mom was alive My dad hurt his eye but his ire was fine Why was I the only one stuck on the outside Mommy I cried, daddy I lied I felt it in my spine It hurt i recall but im prepped for withdrawal all fall imma ball cause all y’all tagalong im off their allowance i found failure accidents tailored isolating hysteria syncopated suburbia the malice in the picket fence we can just die again i got a month i wont last anymore im finna flex on the town i got month i wont last anymore they finna forget im around Off an honor roll smoking lots of dope Im anonymous lost a scholarship Mom and pops have been on my mantelpiece Looking at pictures thatre fitted in frames Feeling I'm fighting the feeling of now feeling drained I'm rolling on Molly like mamma I'm blessed She tells me the Dali is who should impress I'm looking I'm smirking who coulda guessed Bearded no turban but I'm terrorist To those who just look at the color and kin It's muddled again my drinkll be browner my only skin I'm slipping up out of my comforting whims I'm picking up right where my daddy left off Where his daddy left off Where parentage pawns love for the cause Jumble the jobs the mumble the praise Accentuate odds and evens don't even factor into the entire facade No breaking it even you should be breaking the vault Making Em all happy you born Sappy I know Ive been proud of less My accent has worn... I'll be back in morn I lied to own I vanishing now Magic is prone to tantalize loss Miracles found when mediums morphed Convey the inner desire to walk Off the plank I'm out of a job I forget all who to thanks Now I'm thanking Em all Thanking Em my daddy Thanking my moms Writing that letter that pen is my cross Lightening whenever I take a quick pause It is there loss I am a boss Wow wow I am absolved Lost in the heavens inside of this cup I'm drinking it up im giving a f--- You wanted me right? You wanted me wanted me right? Ight Offer me price ice vice something so nice To keep me from taking a knife as advice Slicing they eyes the slits just surmise Their vision aligned to tunnels hidden from light
Jul 26, 2015 I'm rolling on Molly like mamma I'm blessed She tells me the Dali is who should impress I'm looking I'm smirking who coulda guessed Bearded no turban but I'm terrorist Love the production, great flow as always..keep bringing the heat
Jul 27, 2015 @Peter Parker @Akio @Radeem @JCinator @FreeAgent @Sign Language @Pixel mentioning people that might not have gotten the creativesxn mention
Jul 28, 2015 This is actually very good. I only don't like a few moments when, in my opinion, you overused mulltis. It seems like you were trying to impress everybody at a push. Although from what I remember, you always have been doing this s---. It has turned into your trademark, but I'm not really sure whether it's a positive or a negative thing. I'd like to hear your opinion on this. Other than that, it was very, very enjoyable song.
Jul 28, 2015 honestly I think the sooner you drop the young thug voice the better off you'll be...the "on the verge of a nervous breakdown flow" only really works for thug because he's still in complete control of his voice (yours is still pretty erratic.) again do what you like because I can tell you're getting a lot better at this style, but I'm just not sure you'll reach your full potential as an artist by sticking with this...just some friendly advice m8
Jul 28, 2015 yeah i need to put more thought into my writing for sure, i just write the first thing that comes to my mind. its never really intentional. glad you liked it man yeah i definitely dont have as much control over my voice as i would like..im just waiting for my normal voice to sound rap-friendly tbh lol. its too boring for my own tastes..but then again ive been told its actually not bad so maybe i should stop being critical of my self and trying more standard stuff again. just to see my progression thanks for the feedback man
Jul 28, 2015 haha yea I get where you're coming from, I suffer from the same fear of being boring/background music, but idk I was just listening to Blu today and he's completely captivating even though he's kind of monotone on some of his projects. my best advice is just trust your listeners...they'll listen. you don't need to have a crazy cadence for them to pay attention.
Jan 20, 2016 T I have to say its great to see how far your current style has brought you, but pls continue looking for ways to enhance your vocal perfomances with an authentic and natural style.
