[ropes] 3-track project

Started by Narsh, Aug 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. underground
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    Sep 30, 2015
    Mix isn't very good
    You need to give yourself more room for breaths you go like 4-6 bars without it and I can tell
    That's all I got I don't want to be overly critical or a 'hater'
     
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  2. Narsh
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    Sep 30, 2015
    hey give me all the feedback u got m8 theres nothing wrong with that

    i appreciate it
     
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  3. underground
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    Sep 30, 2015
    The delivery didn't pull me in, my advice is really sell it
    Whatever emotion you're trying to convey, do it about 2x what you think is necessary. For me I'll record and it feels good but that emotion gets lost in the mix sometimes
    And the flow sounded weird to me, but that might of been mainly cuz of the delivery idk
     
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    ozy

    Oct 3, 2015
    I like this...I like this a lot
     
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  5. Narsh
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    Oct 3, 2015
    Good advice man I'll definitely keep it in mind!!
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Oct 3, 2015
    f--- that means a lot coming from you m8...I'll take any review/feedback you have to offer

    Im gonna put out a longer tape in the near future that consolidates some of my best s--- from the past year and I'm deff gonna try to re work and keep a track from here on that. Probably sounds.
     
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  7. ozy
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    ozy

    Oct 3, 2015
    good s--- man. it has a lot of replay value. keep it up.
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Oct 4, 2015
    :future:

    love you buddy
     
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  9. Narsh
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    Oct 4, 2015
    @Ozy favorite track?

    @Jet @Charlie Strangelove u guys ever peep this?
     
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  10. Charlie Work
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    Oct 4, 2015
    Your flow is tighter, but I think most of my old feedback still applies. I think you're trying to be something you're not.
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Oct 4, 2015
    Word my delivery is very strained on a lot of what I do and I know it doesn't help to say that's how I naturally emote. Because as a listener whatever impression I make on you thu the music is all that counts, and if you feel it doesn't sound natural then I cant convince you otherwise and won't try haha

    Hopefully the new project I'm working on has a better mix for you, I'd deff appreciate ur feedback on that when I drop it :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  12. ozy
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    ozy

    Oct 4, 2015
    definitely sounds
     
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