Show off your lyrics !!

Started by J WALK, Nov 26, 2014, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 26, 2014
    *this is not a place to steal lyrics*
    Show off your lyrics!
    Here's a rap I wrote a day ago
    Criticism welcomed

    Finna pop off
    I hear y'all Talking all that s---
    Take the lock off
    Then ul get dropped off right next to the swamp
    To legit
    Time to log off
    projectile at high velocity
    Don't cross me
    Or your
    Head finna get knocked off
    Chick to the side yellin tellin me to stop
    Hearing going out , can only feel my self cough
    So many years getting high
    Time crimes court fines
    Paper that I've lost
    Havnt blazed in a while
    Who's got the
    Medi from the shop
    Top of the crops
    Reminiscing on decisions
    Bangin slagin dope
    Stealing and takin
    Souls taken
    Shaken up
    So abrupt
    There's one to get in
    pist cuz there's no oxy refills at the pharmacist
    Tryna sin
    Doctor cut off the script
    d--- dog I'm stressed
    Withdrawing lookin like a exorcist
    Now where to begin
    It's a test
    To get arid of the rest
    Wishes on my list, one of them is that drugs wouldn't control progress and stress
    take down even the best
    Ain't listening
    Heroin tearin tin
    Dead space staring in
    Gettin dope my main objective
    Ain't subjective nor selective
    On who's gonna robed and dropped
    Get the message I'm highly addicted, I should of stopped
    end up in jail or In a casket popped
    f--- it, Get buck s---
    Back to topic
    pass me the electric
    never feeling connected
    b---- tellin me she feelin like I don't give a s--- no more neglected
    After I get my buzz and rush off these pills I've Been doing lately , crushed 80s then youl get my attention
    But for the second
    I need you to quit ur bitchin
    I need that fixin
    She cursing then shes flirtin
    Tellin me il never get in that skirt again
    Even tho I'm the best that's been in
    Makin me aggressive
    No discretion with the Wesson
    Reload the weapon
    Never roll around un protected
    Don't think this is a confession
    But if I'm the one you testin
    Get blasted with my blessin
    You ain't u wanna f--- with a man who's on the edge with depression
    A journey into my rap sessions
    Spawning beings
    Feeding feens
    Ain't no pondering
    Not even a question
    I'm crazy
    Both eyes lazy
    f---, I got rabies
    Be careful or you might be greatly worried for your safety
    Fly since 94, doing drugs since 9 daily
    Yo trick tryna have my baby
    She's sucking my d-ck
    While I'm sniffing up s--- out a hundo bill
    Chill home boy
    She's quite a lady
    I love when I f--- her all night
    Your out of town thinking every things alright
    You ain't gotta clue what's going down outa site
    J walks up in her tight
    Then you get home after I been up going double time in her butt, then I nut up right in her guts
    Then you tell ur whole crew
    God d---! my girls super tasty
    I Can never concentrate
    My minds always racing
    Bran new js cetch me lacing
    Duckin the f---in police tryna chase and taze me
    Every lady that I've loved hates me
    J-walk
     
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  2. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Nov 26, 2014
    Finna pop off
    I hear y'all Talking all that s---
    Take the lock off
    Then ul get dropped off right next to the swamp
    To legit
    Time to log off
    projectile at high velocity
    Don't cross me
    Or your
    Head finna get knocked off
    Chick to the side yellin tellin me to stop
    Hearing going out , can only feel my self cough
    So many years getting high
    Time crimes court fines
    Paper that I've lost
    Havnt blazed in a while
    Who's got the
    Medi from the shop
    Top of the crops
    Reminiscing on decisions
    Bangin slagin dope
    Stealing and takin
    Souls taken
    Shaken up
    So abrupt
    There's one to get in
    pist cuz there's no oxy refills at the pharmacist
    Tryna sin
    Doctor cut off the script
    d--- dog I'm stressed
    Withdrawing lookin like a exorcist
    Now where to begin
    It's a test
    To get arid of the rest
    Wishes on my list, one of them is that drugs wouldn't control progress and stress
    take down even the best
    Ain't listening
    Heroin tearin tin
    Dead space staring in
    Gettin dope my main objective
    Ain't subjective nor selective
    On who's gonna robed and dropped
    Get the message I'm highly addicted, I should of stopped
    end up in jail or In a casket popped
    fk it, Get buck s---
    Back to topic
    pass me the electric
    never feeling connected
    b---- tellin me she feelin like I don't give a s--- no more neglected
    After I get my buzz and rush off these pills I've Been doing lately , crushed 80s then youl get my attention
    But for the second
    I need you to quit ur bitchin
    I need that fixin
    She cursing then shes flirtin
    Tellin me il never get in that skirt again
    Even tho I'm the best that's been in
    Makin me aggressive
    No discretion with the Wesson
    Reload the weapon
    Never roll around un protected
    Don't think this is a confession
    But if I'm the one you testin
    Get blasted with my blessin
    You ain't u wanna fk with a man who's on the edge with depression
    A journey into my rap sessions
    Spawning beings
    Feeding feens
    Ain't no pondering
    Not even a question
    I'm crazy
    Both eyes lazy
    fk, I got rabies
    Be careful or you might be greatly worried for your safety
    Fly since 94, doing drugs since 9 daily
    Yo trick tryna have my baby
    She's sucking my d*ck
    While I'm sniffing up s--- out a hundo bill
    Chill home boy
    She's quite a lady
    I love when I fk her all night
    Your out of town thinking every things alright
    You ain't gotta clue what's going down outa site
    J walks up in her tight
    Then you get home after I been up going double time in her butt, then I nut up right in her guts
    Then you tell ur whole crew
    God d---! my girls super tasty
    I Can never concentrate
    My minds always racing
    Bran new js cetch me lacing
    Duckin the fking police tryna chase and taze me
    Every lady that I've loved hates me
    theg

     
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  3. Mathias ♛
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    Mathias ♛ I took a pill in Ibiza

    Nov 26, 2014
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  4. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 26, 2014
    Lol at theg just copy/pasting my lyrics
     
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  5. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 26, 2014
    Lol
     
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  6. Mano
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    Nov 26, 2014
    I remember those lyrics. He posted them on SL so I think you're stealing
     
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  7. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 26, 2014
    Lol the lyrics are about my life... Rap names j walk
     
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  8. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 26, 2014
    No one can spit em like me :p
     
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  9. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 27, 2014
    J walk cross the f---ing street oh see, she sucking me so f---ing leet/ interrupt every time you speak/ just me spitting / when I do record, no album dropping just a d--- leak/ see I'm on these opioids/ Optimus off his prime/ so torn n s---/ asking god, or what ever f---in ET looking at my life, whys this happen again/ now let's not pretend/ that I was finna win/ lungs filled with nitroglycerin/ homie hope you listening/ cuz when I spit the sick s---/ off the k/coke/dope/crack/smack benzos having a panic attack, I'm having a picnic/ acid trip/ 10 hits off the blotter/ all in black robber/ walked in on my b---- pissin, that's when I noticed hair on her p----/ HARRY POTTER!/ caught her/ shot her/ oh wait? That's not her?/ cuz to my ex f--- HER/ to my next f--- HER/ excuse me ms.? May I f--- ur?/ I'm goosing on ya AFLAC/ crazy as f--- no longer addicted to the smack/ screaming h--- ya I'm a juggalo/ turn around smack four hoes/ I meant to say h--- ya those t-ts il juggle let me handle those/ whoah, who's got the snow? Denver to boulder C to the O/ down with tech/ not a clown though/ but il roll with who ever as long as they getting doe/ hitting licks ya homie for sho/ took ur tickets I'm rolling at your favorite show/ j walk slow your roll/ tryna steal my rhymes I wrote another/ two hot nude chicks in the bed? I fart under the covers/ never pass on f---ing a trick in the a---/ bust then crash/ like a plane on 9 eleven/ or when I was nodding out and drove into the seven 11/ I'm possessed please call the reverend
     
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  10. Mano
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    Nov 27, 2014
    Sorry those are the worst lyrics I've ever read
     
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  11. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 27, 2014
    Dope huh lol
     
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  12. FLORIDA MAN
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    Nov 27, 2014
    Please stop doing that.
     
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    Nov 27, 2014
    @J-Walk
    @theg likes to mock
    These lyrics are gonna give you a shock
    You'll be on your knees sucking my c---
    Begging for forgiveness
    You are going to start calling me a genius
    Jesus what a s-----y artist you are
    You had to go back to 2011 to post lyrics that aren't even good
    You better not show your face around my hood, understood?
    Cause the next time all of us see you, you are going to making us bake goods
    Or we're going to toss your body in the woods
    d--- I'm so good, I'm gonna do a freestyle for tim westwood
    Yes I probably should just end it right here,
    Your ugly a--- probably won't even appear.
     
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  14. J WALK
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    J WALK TECHN9CIAN

    Nov 27, 2014
    Should I stop? I will. Maybe close thread.
     
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    KvB

    Dec 6, 2014
    /thread
     
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    Medici comin' for the top dollah

    Dec 8, 2014
    Let me hop on this diss just to treat this kid like piss,
    s--- thread was made it missed, lyrics s---,
    I go bananas on a beat, so I stick to acapella,
    knock a fella... from one direction to anotha,
    your rhymes shine bright only in the daylight,
    yo s--- don't stand out so don't stand up,
    deregister yourself and SHUT THE f--- UP.
     
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Dec 12, 2014
    im the type of guy to spike your minute maid lemonade with some vodka and make you in need of clinic aid
    im a renegade, i dont give a f--- about what anybody in the senate say
    i got the rap name from a K18 oxycodone pill and im an addict so hence the name
    always high as s--- you might think im tryna levitate
    but let me put an end to everything you speculate
    im just tryna medicate so let me know if you got a better way
     
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    Dec 12, 2014
    imgur.com/a/jg7ze
    pastebin.com/raw.php?i=mqaB8kdU

    (my handwriting is terrible)
     
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    CSW Member 3461

    Jan 6, 2015
    more people should post their s---
    :khaled2:
     
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    Meero Ay ay ay

    Jan 6, 2015
    out
     
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