SIMHA

Started by Narsh, Nov 25, 2014, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Nov 25, 2014
    Check out any of my recent tracks and let me what you think bruh

    They are all very different from each other.

    tempation (big krit remix):



    geisha (look in the mirror) rough:



    Flew Away (:emoji_heart:) prod. LasiK:



    would love any and all feedback/suggestions fam. on the mixing or the just in general.

    edit: lets test out these mentions lol @Jet @LasiK @Creation @Nay Nay @J-Walk @Winter @Radeem @whoever else

    (also the new mention system is cool af)
     
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  2. Narsh
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    Nov 28, 2014
    I h8 y'all, I got better too ='''''(
     
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  3. Myril
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    The first song is one of the worst songs I've ever heard. The accent you're doing is horrific.

    I could make all your songs better within a minute. Just delete the voice layer.
     
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  4. Narsh
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    temptation? the one that starts with "i ignite the knife and I dab the wax?" What accent are you even talking about?
     
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  5. Oldboy
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    give it a while brah things will get better
     
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  6. Myril
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    On Temptation ye. Your voice is way better on the last one. (not saying it's good)
     
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  7. Narsh
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    hey Im glad Myril found his way here though! -_- haha

    Huh? Really. Ive only gotten good feedback for Temptation. Im pretty sure even Jet liked it a lot.

    The middle one is the roughest to listen to since it's poorly mixed/auto tune/etc. You have to like the style or you'll hate it.

    And the last one, like you said, is definitely the most natural sounding. I guess it's because Im kind of singing for some parts.

    I posted these 3 because they're all VERY different from each other, nahmean?

    Thanks for listening though man, I appreciate it. I always appreciate any kind of feedback, as long people take the few minutes it takes to actually listen to something.
     
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  8. FLORIDA MAN
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    Really bad. All of it
     
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  9. Mano
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    Awful. Agreed with @hank
     
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  10. Narsh
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    Thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate it!
     
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  11. Narsh
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    dont think this will get much feedback on here, but check it out if you have time (ill be speaking to myself pretty often in this thread lmao)
    6 am seshes :blunt: aka i dont sleep cause sleep is the cousin of death
    skyfall freeverse (prod. by menthol slim):
     
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  12. Charlie Work
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    Dec 6, 2014
    Your style sounds very forced. Your influences (notably Thugger) do not suit your voice. That said I respect the work ethic and think some soul searching would do your music wonders. Just try to get comfortable with a certain sound instead of trying so many out.
     
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  13. Narsh
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    The lack of ever working on projects leads to me trying a lot of different things out. I think the Yung thug influences are only apparent in a few songs intentionally meant to sound like that, like skyfall or geisha

    You're completely right about me needing a sound tho, and hopefully I find one with time

    Thanks for checking some s--- out :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  14. Gongre
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    Your voice isn't really suited for the style you're tryin to do, honestly, I'd recommend you try and go with more of a slow flow like evidence.
     
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