Nov 11, 2017

It's very bad on almost every possible level
this isn't creative, melodic, structured, balanced or even audible
the tempo is all over the place. let alone the keys.
there is absolutely no rhythm whatsoever in this sound.
what's the point of posting something so underachieved (like you said it's your first one)
you could have waited 'til you at least get way better
So, no, there are no "errors" in this beat,
this beat is an error

Plus this has NOTHING to do with that section
some of us are trying to run a serious board up in here.

My advice is,
if you are serious about this,
be honest with yourself, get some pro tools, learn the basics of beat making
make your own drum patterns (this is generic as f---)
once you've mastered to make a proper beat by the books
try to find YOUR sound, and identity

There are dozens of new 13 year old beatmakers on soundcloud every day that sound so simple and unoriginal
But at least you'll hear they can build a proper instrumental structure and mix the instruments rightfully

I don't intend to be mean
But if you want to pursue in this lane
I hope you have a lot of free time and courage