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  1. sheldon
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    sheldon

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    reesey What You Looking At This For?

    Jan 20, 2018
    You're calling him garbage?
     
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  3. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 20, 2018
    im gonna delete it when my next song drops fam, i just wanted yall opinions lmfao
     
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  4. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 20, 2018
    it sound a bit better now?
     
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  5. reesey
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    reesey What You Looking At This For?

    Jan 20, 2018
    Fix the mixing
     
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  6. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 20, 2018
    thanks man appreciate it alot
     
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  7. Freshandclean
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    Freshandclean I'm fresher than you all, so I don't have to pause

    Jan 22, 2018
    Naw n----- how knit :srsguy:



    Yes moutherfucka how to rap:50:
     
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  8. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 22, 2018
    how to rap?
     
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  9. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 20, 2018
    thanks for the feedback
     
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  10. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 20, 2018
    :currydead::currydead::currydead: dilla slander
     
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  11. Xmipod
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    Xmipod

    Jan 20, 2018
    Its not good for you to post your opinion
     
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  12. Xmipod
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    Xmipod

    Jan 20, 2018
    Mixing isnt good, but its a throwaway so it doesnt matter.

    Even on the single Id say bring your voice out. Your rapping is pretty good
     
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    reesey What You Looking At This For?

    Jan 20, 2018
    X looks like he runs like Naruto
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  14. Interlude
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    Interlude

    Jan 20, 2018
    Tell him what you didn't quite like, so he can improve. That's what this is all about my man
     
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    reesey What You Looking At This For?

    Jan 20, 2018
    It's meh imo
     
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  16. Interlude
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    Interlude

    Jan 20, 2018
    Nice production and vibe. Very good flow. I already said that in the last thread and you have nice voice so mix your voice a little louder for f---s sake.

    The beat switch tho :sweatt:
     
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  17. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 22, 2018
    Lol idk how to teach u how to do that

    i just started freestyling at first, and then i started writing way later when i decided to actually make music

    Just try to imitate your fav rapper’s style at first, it helps

    My fav rapper when i started out was Earl, so i tried rhyming like him
     
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  18. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 22, 2018
    lmao this is NF tier bars cuz
     
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    Bourbon Ben Mad pooper

    Jan 22, 2018
    ur d-ck small thats y the va run away from u
     
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  20. sheldon
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    sheldon

    Jan 22, 2018
    thanks man, i will
     
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