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Started by sheldon, Mar 29, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

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  2. 1999
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    This is AOTY, calling it now.
     
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  3. Genius Is Hot Trash
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    Varun out here saving 2018
     
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  4. 1999
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    This is what QUESTION MARK was tryna be
     
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    when ur homie better at making rap music than Eminem in 2018
     
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  6. sheldon
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    :currydead:
     
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    @EminemSXN
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  8. sheldon
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    u really busted out the Em Sxn tag lmao
     
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  9. 1999
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    why's half the people tagged in the OP not even existent, how old is that tag wall
     
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    idk like a month old
     
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  11. sheldon
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    ppl change they names too much
     
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    Ion know who you could be tlkin bout
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    3 days ban for this acct and your alt
     
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  14. 1999
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    what alt
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    [​IMG]

    op won
     
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    in for Tyler Waves Koolo beef in 2018
     
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    :currydead::currydead::currydead:
     
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    In for classic
     
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    Thoughts?
     
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

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    Sorry I was sleeping. Here are my honest thoughts:

    On God/Miss was definitely the best work you’ve put out so far. Very versatile and compelling. Espescially that second half, but throughout that first half too. Really don’t have any gripes with it at all. I’m picking up some Jaden smith vibes from the first half. 9/10

    STOPWATCH has great production, and great lyrics, but I’ll be honest it would be a better song with more powerful delivery. I get the earl sweatshirt influence, but these lyrics aren’t having the same impact they should. If you notice how Earl stresses the cadence on certain words important to the rhyme scheme, you should try that, maybe mix it a tiny bit louder too. But overall I really enjoyed it. The singing at the end was great too, once again you’re really versatile. 8/10

    The last track with Pac at the beginning was a nice touch, and the production is great, as the lyrics. Here you sound a lot like XXXTentacion, not a bad thing but the song is a bit more generic than the other two in my opinion. 7/10

    Overall this is a great little release and my only advice is to find a way to not overuse the influence of these artists, while keeping the versatility that lets you channel many artists in your music. Working on finding your own sound more will definitely go a long way, but these myriad sounds don’t clash and do mix well together. Project as a whole is about an 8/10.

    You’re definitely talented and have what it takes to make it, just keep your head up and keep grinding!
     
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