May 13, 2018

Here is my new song!

Lyrics:

Hook x2
Everybody sound the same
Who the f--- the counterweight
Ya’ll on this lil wave
I’m about to dig a grave
All of yall lil dumb
Show me who the real ones
Everybody out the way
Out the way

Bridge x2
Mumbling this nonsense
Everybody’s on this
Music with no content
Debating who the hottest

Verse 1
Now a days, ya’ll sound the same
Its a crowded place, move out the way
I’ve been alienated, been outta space
Pulling d-ck moves, so how's it taste
Ya’ll autotune it, then call it music
No heart into it, its just all illusions
And the part that’s stupid, its excecuted
The next to do it, wont be hard to influence
Ya’ll scripted, with the same plot
To brainwash, what you claims hot
I’ma change the topic, and drain the swamp
Arrange the bodies, in the same plot
Ya’ll drug addicted, or is it just business
To get the club lit, or the young to witness
Not a tough decision, when theres money in it
Instead of speaking up, you just mumble this s---
There’s more behind it, cant ignore the silence
A formed alliance, ya’ll support blinded
Can’t afford to buy it, I’m morally binded
It’s in my DNA, and your’s is diamonds
Were made weak, to be enslaved sheep
Were taught freedom, but can’t speak
So mumble rap, is a way to teach
Just to keep us seated, and remain asleep

Bridge 2
But I cant do this,
No no no no no
I cant do this
I just can't f---ing stand this music
No no no no no
I cant do this
No no no no no

Hook x2
Everybody sound the same
Who the f--- the counterweight
Ya’ll on this lil wave
I’m about to dig a grave
All of yall lil dumb
Show me who the real ones
Everybody out the way
Out the way

Bridge x2
Mumbling this nonsense
Everybody’s on this
Music with no content
Debating who the hottest

Verse 2
If I made a list, who the greatest is
In this current state, I’d be saying this
It’d be Cole and Kendrick, and Joyner Lucas
Then maybe Logic, ya boy included
That’s being modest, I’m C Wallace
My egos big, let me meet the hottest
I’m cleaning house, I’ma keep it spotless
Asleep on the couch, with my feet up on it
You dont want me WOKE, I’m a sleeping giant
This is my jungle, don’t feed the lion
They say mumble rap, is where the moneys at
But tell Pump to pack, cant keep quiet
Its been long enough, I swear to god I’m up
My ears been ringing, so I call the bluff
But its not you, as I walk the booth
I’m like a teenage boy again, ya heart is crushed
So speak to me, just between the knees
Its time to blow, but please no teeth
Cause you known biters, with ghost writers
I keep it tucked, like I keep the peace/piece
But I’m like ya’ll , I don’t do either
I refuse to hide it, to clueless minors
Just let it hang, as you stretch ya chains
Did my message change, or are you wiser?






-2:55

 

May 14, 2018

Was really feeling this till “then maybe Logic” and It killed the whole thing for me.

 

May 14, 2018

Haha thanks, that’s why I followed it was the next couple of bars saying I’m being modest etc

 

May 17, 2018

f---ing white people

 

May 17, 2018

also Joyner Lucas and Logic are straight garbage

 

May 17, 2018

Thanks for the feedback!

 

May 25, 2018

Maaaaan, Logic I agree, but I kinda f--- with Joyner

 

May 31, 2018

Would appreciate more feedback, thanks!

 

May 31, 2018

I appreciate your time to listen and give feedback. I also get where youre coming from although you missed the point of this song completely and the lyrics and meaning. Which is why I posted the lyrics as well. Youre saying the exact opposite of what youre listening to in this song. I'm saying how everyone these days is riding a certain wave and all sounding the same from a mainstream route. Saying people should be more creative and be original. Also I talk about how mumble rap/modern hiphop is feeding into the negative stereotypes of the culture paved by white corporate america. Used as a brainwashing tool. Lastly if you listen to/read the bars following after my "greatest list of current music" I'm contradicting the statement, and squashing the cliche list. But thanks for you time, I sincerely apprieciate your time! Much Love!

 

May 31, 2018

Did you really tell the smartest guy on this site, who also runs a writing website that he doesn’t understand what you meant in your music? He’s saying that going against the grain in the fashion you are is cliche and not really going against the grain.

 

Jun 1, 2018

I’m so sorry that my response to someone other than yourself took away energy from you to take what I said personal. Especially since what I said in response wasn’t disrespectful but a clarification of the words I wrote. Much love to you as well! Happy Friday!

 

Jun 1, 2018

Being a self righteous prick isn’t going to get people to enjoy your s-----y music bro. You have potential with your flow and rapping but your lyrics and content are trash and song structure is kinda boring.

 

Jun 1, 2018

Thanks bro!

 

Jun 1, 2018