your rhyming is on point as always. im always a fan of your compound rhymes and syllable count. my only complaint would be that I think theres things that could be done with the mix to bring the topic and feel out. but that's just me looking at it with my engineer brain. youre good at what you do brother. im also jealous of how easy you make hooks look. I always over think hooks and end up getting frustrated when writing them. also I believe I have a beat for us, im just working on getting the topic set, and some vocals laid to it
