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  1. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    gonna drop a new 3 track project...probably like tomorrow

    basically record and mixed all the tracks today itself..but gonna check em out with fresh ears tomorrow

    its pretty groovy brahs

    @CreativeSXN

    the shouts on the first track go to those 6 people that liked my status a few hours ago lol :emoji_fire:

    [ropes]:
    1. Tianjin
    2. stream
    3. Count on Hope [ropes]

     
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  2. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    [ropes]:
    1. Tianjin
    2. sounds
    3. Count On Hope [ropes]


    @CreativeSXN

    thanks in advance for listening guys, let me know what you think. :bigquint:

    :emoji_heart: :future:
     
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  3. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    [ropes] comin @ 4:20 pm EST

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  4. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    @Final
    @Deadpool
    @Nori
    @Pato
    @Jaba24
    @Soldier


    in dat order
     
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  5. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 15, 2015
    I thought u legit were saying u came in a plug
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    this is what i record with lmao
    [​IMG]

    yes, thats a usb go mic attatched to a f---in' lamp lol

    :wiggins:
     
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  7. Nori
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Aug 14, 2015
    At like 13 seconds in, "The homie Pat" my Twitter in 10th grade :hovcry:

    Crooked had his Hip Hop Weekly Reloaded series going on, and he would shout you out if you tweeted him in advance. Crook a real one.
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 15, 2015
    i dont collab with thugs :hehehe:
     
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  9. Charlie Work
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    Charlie Work Level 5 Goblin

    Aug 15, 2015
    Future track names:

    1. African AIDs Epidemic
    2. I Can't Breathe (LOL)
    3. Hanging w/ Robin Williams
     
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  10. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    @Skippy @M.I.C. @Smitty @Squid @FINESSING @Big Mitch @Akio @JCinator @BigCountry @Mike Tyson and the rest of the brodies should also check this out when they can
     
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    Narsh

    Aug 14, 2015
    this cover doe

    [​IMG]

    :lawd:
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Aug 14, 2015
    :dead:
     
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  13. Pato v3
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    Pato v3 exilio

    Aug 14, 2015
    Sorry, just finished my nap
    First of all, thanks for the shoutout

    Second of all:

    :laff:

    Overall I liked the project. I can see the improvement lyrically speaking. I found the content of this tape bizarre but interesing. My fav track is Count on Hope.

    Suggestions:
    • I think sometimes on your rhymes you try to fit a lot of things in a pretty small fragment of time. This whole section from "sounds" for example:
    You're describing a lot of important stuff here but there is no description of the context or what's going on in general. I don't know if that was your intention but honestly I don't really enjoy it. Sometimes it feels like your lyrics are overcharged, but I'm not getting anything from the descriptions. Mainly "sounds" suffers this issue, I don't really see it in Tianjin or Count on Hope btw

    • Talking about "sounds", yeah I didn't really enjoy the song neither. Your flow is good but it has the problem above and I don't f--- with the beat.
    • I think you should add more wordplay to your tracks. Puns like the one I quoted are pretty dope haha, and they feel fresh after so many descriptions and contexts listed in your verses
    • Last but not less, imo since your first tracks you've improved a lot your songwritting abilities. Why don't make songs with actual hooks and better structure? I'll like to see what you can do.

    This was a dope project. But I want to see something bigger. Your potential is huge and I don't think you've something to prove with regard your rapping skills.

    Keep it up :mynig2:
     
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  14. Final
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    Final ⚘

    Aug 14, 2015
    haha yea narsh man i like this project much more... your voice and flow are much much better imo

    i think sounds is my favorite lol

    you sound like you've been in a hyperbolic time chamber and you just came out
     
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  15. Jaba24
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Aug 14, 2015
    Your improving. Honestly you should rap with the deeper voice you did at the beginning (on Tianjin). You actua sound pretty cool that way instead of when using ur higher voice.

    Flow was pretty smooth and good

    Dope beat too
     
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  16. Charlie Work
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    Charlie Work Level 5 Goblin

    Aug 14, 2015
    4/20 blaze it #doingweed
     
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