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  1. Deadpool
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    Deadpool the end

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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

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    :mjcamby:
     
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

    Oct 11, 2015
    I could see a chick pulling off the hook easily though.
     
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Oct 11, 2015
    I wanna see that c--- jerk, in my a---
    i wanna see it tickle, make me c-m
    I wanna see that c--- jerk, in my a---
    i wanna see it tickle, make me c-m
    i wanna see that d-ck c-m right away
    i wanna s--- that c--- all night and day
    i wanna s--- that d-ck at my own pace
    c-m on my face
    taste like frito lay
     
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Oct 11, 2015
    Kenwashedup :lmaooo:
     
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  6. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Oct 11, 2015
    it sounds like you're talking way more than yore flowing/rapping

    can't get with the chorus at all :/ production is on point though, sounds like some Cudi s---.
     
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  7. Deadpool
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    Deadpool the end

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    thanks for the feedback fam i still got alot to work on but thats why i go to school for it good looking out
     
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Oct 11, 2015
    On the real though @Jax this is dope. I like it a lot, I like this better than you first few songs. Can't wait for your album to drop so I can buy it for the the picture and claim i got it for my sister :hovcry:
     
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    shahidah watch me work it JT

    Oct 11, 2015
    A harmony with a female vocal would be dope
     
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

    Oct 11, 2015
    The f---ing hook is stuck in my head.

    So it works.

    :ashgray:
     
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  11. threee
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    threee Rip

    Oct 11, 2015
    @Mimi's sister was taken
     
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  12. Nori
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Oct 11, 2015
    "The girl of my dreams don't exist" :mjcry:
     
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  13. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

    Oct 11, 2015
    @Jax I thought the hook felt a bit too 'whiny'. Your vocal range ain't up to doing that style of hook.

    The hook fits with the beat it's just the deliverance.

    f--- you Nori I ain't gonna indulge in your games. :pac:
     
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  14. Ricky
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    Ricky Hip-Hop CEO ™

    Oct 11, 2015
    It's weird to see your avy and these lyrics lol
    Horse c-m incoming
    :hard:
     
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Oct 11, 2015
    You saying he sound like a b----? :melo:
    Just giving it that Nori stimulus
     
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  16. Ricky
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    Ricky Hip-Hop CEO ™

    Oct 11, 2015
    Dayum Jax, I didn't know you rappin and singin.
    It's tight, I like it.
    :wow:
     
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