Jan 7, 2016

a random loose track with the boy @Cyreides

recorded like a month ago..hope to work on more "real" songs with him down the line.



enjoy. @CreativeSXN

Spoiler: lyrics

I move slow like glucose
I throw shots I been dope
Who shot ya u Jim jones
Revenge flow I'm vengeful

Extend those two hands close
I'll trust full if u won't
I'm off those new benzos
I've been broke I'm death stroke tho

And my wrist froze look necro hoe
I'm sexual and a fool
on the metro with a red bull
I'm sweatsoaked

In the bedroom I eat shrooms I do ludes I strip nude
Who knew a schizo like me would prove useful

Truthful leave everything to me it's nothing
Truthfully everything to me is nothing
I believe we are all one in the stomachs
Stuck in our cells till God decided to pump it

Move like I'm on my own cuz I am
Try to Dodge all the obstacle But I can't
Try to move like a mobster very swiftly
Bumpin peewee n thug on my way to cheat

I'm loaded b---- bow to me
Only so I can eat groceries
Most would think gross of me
Ha

Hoax cuz the jokes all on them u see
Memory meant to be centered on centerpiece
Ay

Centipede said to me say what you want to be
Then it seemed to bleed and jubilee changed into scorn

Who can say who did what wrong
Who can make save us from the harm
cut me off or on my arms
Either way itll leave a mark

Makers start to leave a trace
So know we see the faintest spark
Ain't it hard how we evolve but still were sparse
On feeling our feelings out
Hear me out hear me now
Simha said it as he frowned



Every minute of the hour I feel like in Eddie Bauer
I got power I'm jack Bauer but a coward u see thru this s---
I'm useless a nuisance best left puking
it is none or all of all ur businesses
Yes it is I'm a kid save me teach me etiquette
Baby feed me everything
Knowledge or ur energy
I am all that's meant to be
I'm mentally a mess to see
But hold myself so elegantly
Sold my soul to elephants and elevated senselessly
Within the ranks of my religion
region was a piece of it
Peace of mind I wanted it
I got it thru no manuscripts
All of it all of it is in this s---
My friends go out I'm with this s---
They trip I fall back into it
I wish I weren't so innocent
Naivety my nemesis

Centered on my energy my aura was like white she said
She said that she could see it all but then and there I held her stare
My state of mind was very rare
I paid no mind to everyone
I wanted her to read this book
I opened up to chapter one

She read me like an open book
My souls within it swayed it shook
I'm only saying wait and look
The evidence was in the crook

She stole a glance she knew the truth
She called me pure she hated it
I'm honestly a bit unsure but even I debated it
Was I really reasoning
W the how of prophecies
Reading too much into it
Im face to face w just a novelty
Novel me novice needs bottled in
Bother me bought a beach today
Inside my dreams got lots to say
I'm dicaprio I've gone away
My trophies are the words I shape
I'm hoping that I hurt the ways of certain names
Unearth the rage don't circumvent
Serpents spin sudden tense when some starts approaching them
I'm poised to strike I hold it in
I'm imploding like a nova
And I'm rocking like I'm hova

 

Jan 7, 2016

@Cyreides dont work with narsh

 

Jan 7, 2016

took you less than 3 seconds to troll, d--- new record?

 

Jan 7, 2016

you tagged me, and not trolling.

 

Jan 7, 2016

i tagged creativesxn. so i guess a mod should remove you from the gorup if all you're gonna do is troll when tagged

or ban you from this section

 

Jan 7, 2016

not trolling. you aren't a good artist, and cyreides is. he shouldn't be collaborating with you if he's serious about advancing as a brand. i rarely comment when tagged, but since you insist on subjecting us to your "art" incessantly, i felt like it was worth a brief moment to say otr that you're awful and not good by any stretch. real producers should know that and seek out true talent.

 

Jan 7, 2016

mental illness lmao. everyone who doesn't like you is trolling or insecure. absolutely insane.

 

Jan 7, 2016

Beat is super nice, as for the track its meh, your flow started out decent but it got worse and the delivery sounded very amateurish, also the lyrics aren't great

 

Jan 7, 2016

 

Jan 7, 2016

You eat mushrooms in your room alone and strip naked? Da fuq? Lmao

 

Jan 7, 2016

Your flow completely doesn't match up to this beat.

You went off on a relatively mellow instrumental. It's not a perfect combination imo.

 

Jan 7, 2016

yeah i wasnt feeling this too much myself, and wanted to try a different approach but didnt have time recently. and since i already had this version i just mixed what i had and put it out

dont think the beat is "mellow" per say but I get what you mean

 

Jan 7, 2016

as much as i like this beat, i still f---ing hate producing like this.

not touching the discussion in the thread tho w/ a 10 foot pole, gotta try on some level to keep positive vibes in my sxn

 

Jan 7, 2016

okay, i see you

 

Jan 7, 2016

what the h--- did i just listen to lol

 

Jan 7, 2016

My soul

 

Jan 7, 2016

It sounds like there is WAY too much reverb, on the beat and the vocals. I liked the beat (the synth was hard af) and enjoyed the rap a lot, I thought you rode the beat pretty well. But d--- the excessive amount of reverb kind of ruined the track for me. It was hard for me to nod my head to beat or really follow the lyrics because of it, it's almost like watching a really dope video but it was blurry. Anyway, I honestly think both you guys did a great job something just went wrong in the mixing and mastering process.

 

Jan 7, 2016

i just want to say I claim no responsibility for the mixing here

i made the beat early last year and just sent it to narsh to use however he saw fit

 

Jan 7, 2016

LOL. It might just be me though. I am super picky about mixing.

 

Jan 7, 2016

no mixing was killing me lol i was gonna scrap the whole thing and record a different version of the song because of it but just went with it

thanks for the in depth feedback though man appreciate it