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Best Posts: I KNOW you rollin up right about now ;) This will add to your chill vibe!

  1. Charlton01
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    Charlton01

    Aug 16, 2016


    Wassup section.eighteyy?

    Dropped a new track today, got bars on it this time, didn't produce this one but rapping over my own beats is next for me, this is just something I've had planned out for a bit but never recorded...

    Lemme know your thoughts, do you like it, is it tolerable? nothing special? f---ing s---? lemme know!!
    I will be forever grateful to you and this beautiful community of a forum! :)

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Creation
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    Creation By Any Means

    Aug 16, 2016
    Its pretty cool, i love tracks this chill.


    If i could give you some criticism. At parts you sounds like you were reading off a page. Try to do a few punch ins, learn each bar off by heart & deliver the lines in a natural tone.
    Other than that, this is pretty great!
     
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