The Beginning-BigBabyChris

Started by BigBabyChris, Feb 16, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. BigBabyChris
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    Feb 16, 2016
    Let me know what you guys think. Constructive criticism always appreciated. Thanks and Enjoy!

     
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  2. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Feb 16, 2016
    Not bad, enjoyed it overall. Probably could use some work on your flow, it sounds a little off/forced at times.
     
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    PVRO King of all things Pepe's

    Feb 17, 2016
    i f--- with it. nice jazz s---
     
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