Sep 8, 2018 It’s good, though it’s only a 2-syllable rhyme scheme. It would need to be at least a 3-4 syllable rhyme scheme to be considered great in my eyes.
Sep 9, 2018 how u been charlie ? Listen cause I'm building a skyscraper For a strong foundation of wheels of steel Not a reel to reel, but the real deal Polo works the crossfader, he's a bricklayer And the record player turns like the Himalaya Doc the Butcher supplies the cement And the rhymes that I invent is the blueprint While I'm using my mind to make a design Polo puts up the Men at Work sign Yeah, we still building, making a skeleton One of the sucker MC's just fell again So take caution if you want to know the truth I'mma elevate you up to the roof Listen to the sound, don't dare look down Cause you're far from the ground Now you're impressed cause words I manifest Takes you more higher than cess or Buddha bless Hard as concrete, the building's complete Yo Marley Marl, let's stop the breakbeat
Sep 10, 2018 Who'da knew the buddha do to me what it's done? Such cynicism when this isn't in my system. Blunt hypnotism, lift the spliff up to my lips, hon. So much on my mind I gotta give my kids a fist bump.
