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Started by Zeberdee, Mar 21, 2016, in Kanye West Add to Reading List

  1. Zeberdee
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    Album is great. heres a few notes i noted down on my notepad when i was noticing the notes of this half hearted masterpiece.

    - ULB is one of the best songs on the album. i went to watch the album release at msg alone at the cinema and had a big fat spliff before i went in. I flipped my s--- when the first track came on and that piercing synth with kanyes melodic vocals came through those big a--- speakers. great experience.

    - FSTM part 1 >>> part 2. f--- you all for being d-ck riding, band wagoning r-----s and dissing the a------ line cuz mike tyson was the first to point it out. yall virgins scared of the image of amber roses a------ or something? was a great line and showed ye's self awareness towards the whole a------ scandal before the album.

    - cool verse in highlights but the rest is mediocre club s---. another example of how easily the simpletons on here can be persuaded. before i gt banned it was only narsh who wanted to wrap young thugs dreads around his d-ck and pleasure himself. now suddenly everyones a thugger fan? embarrassing.

    - Waves could of been the next Runaway. but no it had to be ruined by chris browns faggy singing/horrendous writing. this is my biggest frustration of kanyes whole career. amazing beat, amazing melodic verse by kanye (the actual verse, not the intro part) and cb comes along and ruins the whole thing. no relation to kanyes original content doesn't have a clue how to write a decent lyric so just takes the name of the song and puts "dont die" after it. "i know! ill sing waves dont die, that sounds catchy!" also "im not a very good musician and i cant think of a decent line to write so ill just sing No LiiiiiiiiiieeeeEeEEeeeEe for four bars and drag it out". Chris browns addition to that sung literally sums up the state of modern day "lets just make it sound catchy" s-----y un-original, un-inspiring, un-creative music. imagine kanye singing his own hook in a similar melody to the verse, then doing a verse rapping for the 3rd verse on keeping it on some deep s---.

    - FML is best song on the album, minus the weeknd. he trys to hard and i would rather have kanye sung the hook himself. the part when he says "and EVEN THO i always f--- my life up" on the second line of each chorus ruins the smoothness of the melody in the first place. like i said dude trys to hard. thank you for listening you 2 people that read this.
     
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    Mar 21, 2016
    ok new favorite user confirmed
     
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  3. Zeberdee
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    where the f--- is new posts
     
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    Very lit review I nearly read it until the end wich is a good thing but I disagree with FSTM 1>>>2 because that's not true even tho idc about the a------ line the 2 is just objectively better
     
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  5. Zeberdee
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    the use of the sample in part 1 alone makes it better than 2. plus the fact that the best part of 2 is the vocoded melody at the end. which is just re-singing the sample from part 1.
     
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    Sure but part 2 is just better lol, lyrically, and it bumps in the whip and is beautifull at the same time
     
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  7. Zeberdee
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    "it bumps in the whip" is probably one of the lowest and least intelligent forms of analyzing and forming your opinion on music there is. sometimes i forget what forum im on.

    and ive only been back 1 hour
     
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    "It bangs" if you prefer
     
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    well i know someone who won't be getting my vote in the sxn80 members awards.
     
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    My life is f-----
     
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    @Narsh all jokes aside, what do you think? do you agree with anything?
     
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    Just above the forum list where it has "All, Hobbies, Music" is probably the closest thing we have to the New Post feature that didn't make the new layout.
     
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    New Post button is here:

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    When I read the title, I was expecting something stupid like;
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    I liked the write up until "...best song on the album, minus The Weeknd" tbh.
    Bias aside, he made the song a lot better. I'm actually disappointed he didn't have a verse. A proper Kanye x Weeknd collab would've been amazing.
     
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    Oh my so this is how you like my old statuses that get overtaken on the home page. :weebey:
     
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    Definitely agree about Waves. So much potential that´s ruined by s-----y writing and trying too hard to make a catchy song.
     
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    Am I the only one that likes Waves?
     
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    amazing beat. kanye is great on it. the rest is complete garbage. including kid cudis sex noises.
     
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    Kid cudis sex noises are my favorite part tbh
     
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