Production Can I get some criticism on this?

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  1. brillo pad beard
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    Oct 2, 2015


    What does @CreativeSXN think?
     
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    Oct 2, 2015
    fam, stuff sounds really off key in that
     
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  3. Charlie Work
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    Definitely something off harmonically. Overall, it's pretty cool. I'd prefer more "less busy" moments like the bridge in the middle and breakdown at the end. Make those noisy synths really pop after you tighten their keys up a little.
     
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    Sounds really...raw, kinda unfinished but in a good way. C-Wizzy gets a horror and 80's vibe from it. Good job.
     
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    are you talking about the detuning on certain instruments or are you saying some notes sound off key?
     
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    still needs to be mastered and I guess a couple things tweaked but thanks for the feedback
     
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    will definitely give you feedback the second I'm able to listen
     
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    I like it a lot. I think that loud buzzing u have should be toned down or eliminated. Otherwise it's great :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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    yeah i'll have to tone it down a little, it cuts through a lot more than expected but i like the melody. thanks for the feedback though :)
     
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    I'm a noob at this technical feedback stuff but it reminds me a bit of a lo-fi type of sound?

    I think that's what it is...
     
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