can you rate my rapping?

Started by Theamazingone, Nov 27, 2019, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Theamazingone
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    Nov 27, 2019


    looking for advice please, I’m just a beginner so I want to know what to focus on to make me better
    Thank yous
     
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  2. MichaelsMad
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    Nov 28, 2019
    little off beat in parts, which is normal when starting out. just try to pay attention to those drums, let those syllables hit those drums, or work in-between them. or listen to the beat and hum out a flow, get the flow down and then just fill that rhythm in with words. keep at it though my dude, youll keep improving.
     
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  3. Ricky
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    Ricky HIP-HOP CEO ™

    Nov 28, 2019
    @Theamazingone I've been waiting to see you post something since forever lol, finally!

    You've picked hard beat to flow on, but it wasn't as bad as I've thought it could be. If this is just beginning... spit more and more and more.

    Post more!
     
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    need stronger voice and faster phase IMO
     
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  5. Theamazingone
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    Thank you, I completely see what you mean. This was just done in a short space of time, I didn’t write it or anything, and I was a lil bit under the influence haha, but yes, that humming trick sounds nice, I will give it a go
     
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  6. Theamazingone
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    Haha, even with an account, I’ve always been more like a lurker, I’m gaining a lot of free time so I might post more tbf!!
    Yeah I feel like I got cocky by picking that beat haha, like maybe a more chilled one would’ve suited me more, thank you
     
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    0/10
     
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  8. Theamazingone
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    I see this too, in my defence on this particular one, it was made in the car and I didn’t really want neighbours to hear so I couldn’t really go all out, like I’d wanna add more character to it definitely. With going fast, the beat definitely calls for it, idk I just wasn’t feeling going fast at the time. I just went with the vibe I did because sometimes things just work. This clearly didn’t tho, haha. Thanks for the advice dude
     
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