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Daddy Warbuck$ - “Secrets”

Started by CSW, Oct 23, 2022, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. CSW
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    thought i’d post this to let you guys know i’m working on learning to follow a beat better
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    Very good smoking loud to this song later
     
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    Classic
     
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    Thank you
     
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    d--- what a b-----r. I think we need an artist spotlight on you bro. Low key best rapper right now.
     
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    Alright, I'll be real with you. Your rhyming ain't bad, this was on beat actually too. There are 3 things you need to make it work at this point:

    1. Better beats, this one sounds like it was made in 50 seconds on a phone app.
    2. More charisma in your voice, put some more energy in it.
    3. Better microphone.
     
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    thank you sincerely. this isn’t any more than a garageband loop i created to try and practice rapping on beat. i’m working on finding/creating better ones on new album. the mic presence and charisma are also what i wanna try working on now. i’m learning to say all the words, and say them on beat, so i also been working with different ways to rap, new styles, deliveries etc. and i bought a new mic! i’m currently learning all the settings etc. thank you all for helping me learn how to build real songs
     
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