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  1. Theamazingone
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    Theamazingone

    Oct 14, 2015
    Hey this is just a random freestyle i did the other week
    kinda just looking for feedback. you know things i can improve on.
    thanks.



    i don't know how to embedd sorry guys
     
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  2. Theamazingone
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    Theamazingone

    Oct 14, 2015
    turns out i do ha ha
     
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  3. gorealsteady
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    gorealsteady heal & create

    Oct 14, 2015
    Amazing m8! Keep going, i r8 8/8!
     
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    Theamazingone

    Oct 14, 2015
    Thanks alot man. much appreciated.
    didnt really expect a good comment since its my first ever recording haha.
     
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    Oct 14, 2015
    I will be extremely honest. I'm not 100% into your voice. There's something about it that just throws me off. I'm not trying to be a d-ck or anything.
     
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  6. Theamazingone
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    Theamazingone

    Oct 14, 2015
    ha ill accept that.
    there have been times where i have felt the same
    but that is a work in progress.
    compared to how it used to be its alot better
     
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  7. rapmusik
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    one thing I could suggest is to work on your volume and enunciation. that could really make a big difference. best of luck to you m8, keep doing you :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  8. Theamazingone
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    Theamazingone

    Oct 14, 2015
    yeah thanks really appreciative of your honesty
    and i shall :)
     
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    The voice you have; I don't know, I believe that your flow matches your voice quite nicely, If you can master the two the end result might be amazing, you just need to touch up on your flow little bit more. Since it is a freestyle, I also believe that when you sit down and write, if you really think about the lyrics you might be able to do somethin

    Getting like a mad scientist kinda vibe on this tho, I like it
     
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  10. Immy
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    Oct 14, 2015
    your voice & flow are a no no.

    Try freestyling more and you'll probably start to develop a real flow
     
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  11. Theamazingone
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    Theamazingone

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    yeah the flow was off abit because of basically not knowing what i was saying ha
    i was gonna go by the feedback whether i should write or not

    thanks :)
     
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  12. gorealsteady
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    gorealsteady heal & create

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    I honestly want to tag the whole forum to check out this masterpiece :rejoice:
     
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

    Oct 14, 2015
    Your voice is unique that's for sure. Are you putting on that voice/using some altering software or it your natural voice? Curious to know.
     
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  14. Theamazingone
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    All natural :)
     
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