I made a rap album, and here's a bunch of art and stuff.

Started by Pigeon, Feb 5, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Pigeon
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    Feb 5, 2015
    I don't intend to make this a career, just had a bunch of free time over winter break so I made this. My voice is kinda cringeworthy but I don't know haha, let me know what you think.



    EDIT: I guess seeing as this is the creative section I was gonna make an Artwork post also, but f--- it I dont wanna make two threads that's real bitchmade. So Ima just make this my art post, along with that album I made, Ill also change the title. Either way here's a bunch of dumb art s--- i've done.



     
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  2. attila
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    Rawest s--- ever.
     
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  3. Pigeon
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    Thanks lol, I used to be on studioleaks, but I guess that was switched to this.
     
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  4. Jordan
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    Jordan ⛴⛵️✈️

    Feb 5, 2015
    I actually like that you did this with no real intention. Your flow (especially when your fast parts) are quite enjoyable.

    Rap more in your freetime, step up your production skills and try to find your own style. You have some potential.
     
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    Slyk God made a prophet.

    Feb 5, 2015
    went in like this:
    :terry:
    after hearing intro fluff:
    :notbad:

    not bad. the eminem inspiration is quite clear...almost in a clone-ish way tho.
     
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  6. Pigeon
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    Yeah haha I wont lie when I say eminem has been my biggest inspiration when it comes to rapping. I have been trying to take on a more playful voice and take the flow away from the similarities to him.
    Thanks though! :D
     
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Feb 7, 2015
    Your writing and content needs an incredible amount of polish, but your voice, flow, and delivery are honestly full of potential. I suggest listening to some s--- like MF Doom, Jonwayne, etc... It's probably gonna be really left field if you're a big Eminem fan, but I think you have a voice that could work in that weird-backpack rap style.
     
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  8. Pigeon
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    wow thanks there bubs. i guess I do put flow first before lyrics haha, which could be setting myself up to get f-----, but I do listen to MF Doom alot, who's also pretty sick, Jonwayne I never heard of really but I'll check him out!
     
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    Feb 8, 2015
    I just

    f--- it
     
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    Feb 8, 2015
    Sounds too copy cat for me. Good luck tho.
     
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    shady xv 2.0 is reel
     
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    and did u rap in a church ? :p

    and that voice crack in the middle of the flufy intro :emoji_wink:
     
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    Feb 8, 2015
    WELL I GUESS I'LL TURN DOWN THE REVERB. also yeah that was a voice crack, i wish i had a sick nasty rap voice but unfortunately i have to make do with this prepubescent b---- voice. hey f----- up but true
     
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    Better than @Narsh
     
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  15. Winter
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    Rapping was decent, but holy f--- @ that artwork :weebey:
     
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    MPURA https://soundcloud.com/mpuramusic

    Feb 9, 2015
    rapping was alright, that artwork is just amazing though, keep it up bro
     
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    That artwork is crazy
     
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    love the art
     
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    It's not bad. Not at all.
     
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