Nov 12, 2017 your flow sounds really messy and almost spoken word, but i actually dug it lyrically. im not a fan of remixes though, i fell like you should have just done this verse over a new beat, might have helped me enjoy it as its own standalone piece of work, rather than just a derivative of someone else's keep workin homie. i think you just need to ride the beat better and it would be dope.
Nov 12, 2017 thanks for the feedback. I was really drunk when I recorded this so that probably didn't help with the flow lmao. but yeah I need to work on riding the beat definitely. Thanks for the feedback.
