Legitimate - FEAST (Lyric Video)

Started by Legitimate, Aug 23, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Legitimate
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    Aug 23, 2017


    Recently dropped a new single titled FEAST. I'm pretty proud of this one; any feedback from you all would be invaluable and highly appreciated. @CreativeSXN @Charlie Work
     
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  2. 1999
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    Aug 23, 2017
    you're like the white ---
     
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  3. sheldon
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    Aug 23, 2017
    you sound so white lmaoo
     
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  4. sheldon
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    Aug 23, 2017
    You arent bad at rappin but a few pointers

    1. Never say gay s--- like "Mixtape comin soon!" on the track. sounds terrible

    2. Dont do this style. Rappers sounding this white should be rappin over some more classic production.
     
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  5. 1999
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    Aug 23, 2017
    slim coming thru with the ether

    Nah OP you're not that bad but listening to the track you released before this its obvious your forcing a menacing voice which you dont have. Be yourself

     
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