Jun 28, 2017

Wassup @CreativeSXN , just wanted to share with you another track,
had a lotta fun writing this one.

What dyall think? wack, aiite or dope?
Personally my fav out of the few that Ive dropped lately but who knows what the market thinks!

A listen would be greatly appreciated

 

Jun 28, 2017

this flow

 

Jun 28, 2017

profile pic relevant

 

Jun 28, 2017

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Jun 29, 2017

If you sayin the tracks fire then thank you my g! ahha

 

Jun 29, 2017

i meant

 

Jun 29, 2017

soo many requotes! ahha

 

Jul 11, 2017

i listened to all your tracks. flow and movement is consistently there but monotone nonetheless. your writing is on point but i feel like you don't capitalize on the range your vocals are capable of. your voice is an instrument with a lot of potential, train it to captivate

 

Jul 18, 2017

I enjoyed it.. a bit monotone? Yea. However it for me was very, Camp Lo esq. I love those cats and a bit Skeelo (little bit taller) esq as well.
Not a critic but since you asked... play w your vocals a bit. More highs and lows were needed. Lyrically great honestly @Charlton01
Well done

 

Jul 19, 2017

ey bruv, thank you for giving all my tracks a listen, really appreciate that fam!

I had to look those people up but I liked what I heard, so thank you for puttin me on to them! haha

To both of you tho, appreciate the comments, It's great feedback and I agree with both of you, When I first started writing I always said i'd focus on getting the flow down first, and then worry about the lyrics, being where I am atm I feel like your comments align exactly with where i've tried to position myself in terms of what i focus on.

I think whats holding me back with delivery is that when I do record (i record and mix at home), i'm still reading my lyrics off a screen and thats probably whats hindering my delivery. Deffs gonna memorise the lyrics before recording on the next one and focus on delivery!