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Started by byNayrB, Oct 26, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. byNayrB
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    byNayrB Incendio I spit heat heat flames

    Oct 26, 2015
    This the first song I released. What do you think of it? And I produced the beat btw

     
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    Astro ASHAD SEND ME THIS!

    Oct 26, 2015
    Not bad, maybe put some more emotion into it and this could be fire :emoji_fire:
     
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Oct 26, 2015
    if your voice was a little louder, this would be straight fire.

    your delivery actually works fine if this is the style you wanna run with. maybe polish your flow a bit. beat is solid and I love the mixing (on the ad lis also)

    @Narsh this sounds like the execution you're going for on most of your songs minus the auto tune
     
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    Nick (;

    Oct 26, 2015
    that beat doeeee
     
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

    Oct 26, 2015
    :wow:
     
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    byNayrB Incendio I spit heat heat flames

    Oct 26, 2015
    Thanks fam, I was thinking about re-recording it, now I will frfr
     
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    byNayrB Incendio I spit heat heat flames

    Oct 26, 2015
    Thanks, I'll fix up my flow. And I mix my own songs. I kinda thought I did a bad job on it, but I guess I didnt lol
     
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    Oct 26, 2015
    Preciate that fam :wayne:
     
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    Cyreides gfy

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    CJ Poe The Dark Vegan

    Oct 27, 2015
    not my style, but get it how you live playboi!
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Oct 27, 2015
    Jet pretty much said it
     
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    byNayrB Incendio I spit heat heat flames

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    Thanks bruhh
     
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