NF - CLOUDS(FiveOh!1 Remix)

Started by FiveOh1, Feb 28, 2021, in Creative Add to Reading List

This one gone fly up in the clouds or crash down

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  1. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Feb 28, 2021
    It’s me again Margaret.
    I realized I hadn’t remixed a song in awhile and that new NF joint was super nice then I saw MAR remixed it so I decided I had to do it one time too.

    not my best work but not my worst either.

    lemme know what’s up.
    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Feb 28, 2021
    @CreativeSXN our boy went in. That Nazi/not see bar was straight flames! Loved the energy and delivery.
     
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    Feb 28, 2021
    NF is GOAT
     
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  4. DKC
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    Feb 28, 2021
    It feels like you're trying to fit too many words into each bar (kinda like if 2017 eminem rapped like blueface lol) but you don't have the dexterity to do that yet. tbh I'd work on mastering some more simple flows/delivery to make the vocals sound more polished, professional and on beat.
     
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    Feb 28, 2021
    Flow is off beat
     
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    Winter Super Comfy

    Feb 28, 2021
    This ain’t it, man
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Feb 28, 2021
    I know that it is off in a few parts but I do not think that a lot of it is.
     
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  8. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Feb 28, 2021
    Whelp. I’ll make sure the next one is.
     
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    Winter Super Comfy

    Feb 28, 2021
    Actually liked your recent stuff, like the mixtape contributions, you’ve improved a lot and this is a regression for you. I know you can do better
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Feb 28, 2021
    To be honest I almost didn’t put this out and was thinking of ditching it but then Ricky messaged me asking what happened to it cause he knew I was doing one, and I told him it wasn’t going like I planned and wasn’t happy with my flow but I sent it to him and he said he liked it and I should at least put it out for the forum to hear.
    But appreciate that, I think the next one I do will be a step forward, I post this on Facebook and asked what track I should remix next and got a couple suggestions that I think I can work with so should be dope.
     
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  11. FiveOh1
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    That’s something I like about this forum, if I post something and it ain’t it y’all gone tell me and tell me what for. Everywhere else they just like “yah this dope”
    Even one of my friends who is very critical of my music and usually doesn’t like it at all said he liked this. So it’s good to get the different things from here.
     
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