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PlayWryte - COLD (New Single)

Started by ItsPwizz, Jul 2, 2020, in Music Add to Reading List

  1. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Jul 2, 2020


    Lyrics

    Hook x2
    Cold
    I’m like this
    Cause your the ones that f--king made me
    Cold
    I’m the reason
    That you keep on saying it is
    Cold
    Everything I touch
    Just freezes and it ceases
    Cold
    This is what you wanted
    So ima be

    Verse 1
    This isn’t over, you had a shoulder, I couldn’t cry on
    The one you gave me, just had me shaking, I’d hate the silence
    So f--king cold, with a runny nose, this shit made me sick
    Your handkerchief, I’ll hang you with it, I’m dangerous
    I grew up quiet, showed you a smile, in the produce isle
    Ya, I was hungry, a food for thought, and I wrote it down
    Was plot and schemin’, this all in secret, with condoleezza
    Was in the bushes, ya I was lookin, to bomb Felicia
    By the looks of it, I could be, pushing envelopes
    You’d never know, this December flow, would put temps below
    I freeze accounts, no recollection, you ever mentioned
    My weather preference, still begs the question, am I heated now

    Hook x2

    Verse 2
    I am snappin, we all nose it, like Michael Jackson
    I am back, Jon Cryer actin, ya Chiropractics
    It isn’t blue face, blue flames, ya light the matches
    I brought the heat, no offbeat, lying in ya ashes
    The truest statement, but blue in the face, I’m frost bitten
    I’m hot and cold, the doctors note, says it contradiction
    My competition, they all are missin, their doctor visits
    I killed them off, with the illest song, they forgot prescriptions
    And that prescription, is skill set, which they never had
    I’m never leavin, just check the fever, the temp is back
    Dissect apart, ya every bar, they icy hot
    The whole verse, was a punchline, mic drop

    Hook x2


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  2. Rick James
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    Jul 2, 2020
    Your engineer fucked up at 1:23, volume goes down a little. Other than that, dope song. It's not that easy beat to spit on, and you flowed really smooth.
     
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  3. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Jul 2, 2020
    I’m my engineer lol, but thanks for the feedback! I don’t hear it though, huh. But I will keep listening. Always appreciate your feedback though homie!
     
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  4. Rick James
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    Jul 2, 2020
    Yeah, I joked with engineer but I'm a sucker for these little details lol
     
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  5. gdot
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    Jul 2, 2020
    Shits dope. Idk about the hook but I like the verses
     
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  6. JMG
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    Jul 2, 2020
    Wow another song about me?
     
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  7. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Jul 3, 2020
    Good looks, appreciate it
     
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  8. the kid on mars
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    the kid on mars Out Of This World

    Jul 3, 2020
    Verses defintley fire. The hook isn't bad per day, it just doesn't have the same impact as the rest of your work does.
     
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  9. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Jul 3, 2020
    Thanks I appreciate that. I’m always switching it up and trying new things. I’m sure not every thing I do it gonna hit the same way for certain people every time. But much love always!
     
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  10. the kid on mars
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    Jul 3, 2020
    That's how you grow. Keep it up. I'm liking all the tracks you've been giving us lately
     
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  11. JMG
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    Jul 3, 2020
    Ur the only one listening though. We all can see how obsessed u are over this dude.
     
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  12. the kid on mars
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    the kid on mars Out Of This World

    Jul 4, 2020
    Just appreciating somebody putting out their art and it actually being decent. Your jealousy is potent. You couldn't put out something a fraction as good as this, that's why you ran away from the beef. We all know you're a pussy dude, just some like to humour you. It's nice to make the special kid feel special from time to time. So go do another victory lap or whatever it is you do and shut the f--k up.
     
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