[post-808s & heartbreak escapist pop] Vardø - Purification

Started by Hana bi, Sep 11, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Hana bi
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    Sep 11, 2017
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    About that destructive object of desire, which leaves you with guilt, shame and hatred in the end:


    Would love to hear some opinions, guys.​
     
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  2. Caslon
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    Sep 11, 2017
    kult kult

    liker coveret veldig men fonten i bunnen irriterer meg lit

    wet synths, clean drums, like the variety in percussion

    maybe add some shorter sounds to break up the monotony of the soundscape

    vocal wise i can hear a lot of weeknd inspiration, would be cool to hear if you tried developing your own unique vocal technique
     
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    Thank you. I'm in my journey developing my vocal melodies yet. For some reason, I used to pay less attention to this part of my music. The stuff I'm working on right now will show the progress:emoji_wink:
     
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    really loving the vibes, makes me want to learn to sing! haha
     
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    that sounds like a motivation!
     
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    @Ordinary Joel @Cyreides what do you think of this joint, guys?
     
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    Sep 11, 2017
    it's nice, tho i think it could use some more variation in the second half where the production is concerned, or be built on more, or could use some kind of breakdown

    cause the production, while nice, definitely gets a bit repetitive by the end
     
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    I got you. Thanks!
     
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    Makes me wanna dive into a pool of loneliness and never get out. :wow2:

    Production is great! Vocals fit nicely as well.
     
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    Happy to hear it!

    Btw, how to use that @ creative sxn to boost the thread a little?
     
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    You have to join the CreativeSXN mention group to be able to tag it.
     
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    how does one join it?
     
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    Hover over your username and click on "Mention Groups"

    Look for "CreativeSXN" mention group and click "Join User Group"
     
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    Thanks. I'll try later.
     
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