River - Eminem [FAN-MADE REMIX]

Started by Copper, Feb 15, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Copper
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    Feb 15, 2018
    Out of all the songs on Revival, River has a REALLY nice vibe to it, and seeing the music video today sparked some creativity. So I got a friend of mine to sing the hook, and set to work on a remix.



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    I've been a liar, been a thief
    Been a lover, been a cheat
    All my sins need holy water, feel it washing over me
    Well, little one, I don't want to admit to something
    If all it's gonna cause is pain
    Truth and my lies right now are falling like the rain
    So let the river run

    I wish I knew why I do this
    I'm honestly clueless
    Before, there was true bliss
    And now, we go through this
    Every day's a battle
    What the f--- is it for?
    I wish I knew how to turn around
    And walk out the door
    Constant war, back and forth
    Talkin' less, screamin' more
    Get so pissed, raise a fist
    She's a mess on the floor
    The words stop flyin'
    She won't stop cryin'
    I'm standin' above her
    Tellin' her that I love her
    She's holding her cheek
    Feelin' hopeless and weak
    Try to tell her I'm sorry
    But she can't even speak
    I don't want her to leave me
    I tell her every day
    I think she really believes me
    I'm beggin' her to stay
    The nights went first
    The fights got worse
    Our relationship now felt
    More like a curse
    I'm comin' home late
    She's stayin' awake
    I call her a nuisance
    She's callin' me ruthless
    Let's see her call me abusive
    After I make her toothless

    I've been a liar, been a thief
    Been a lover, been a cheat
    All my sins need holy water, feel it washing over me
    Well, little one, I don't want to admit to something
    If all it's gonna cause is pain
    Truth and my lies right now are falling like the rain
    So let the river run

    I got her under my spell
    I make her life livin' h---
    But she's obedient now
    I think she handles it well
    I keep her inside
    So I can keep her as mine
    If she starts talkin' to people
    How can I keep her in line?
    They'd probably poison her brain
    And start her thinkin' about life
    And that's not what I want
    What I need's a devout wife
    Who shuts the f--- up
    And speaks when spoken to
    Never cries or sucks up
    They're mentally broken, too
    One day, she told me
    That we needed to chat
    It sounded serious
    Oh man, we're not having that
    So I take my sweet time
    Comin' home that night
    I wanted to wait
    Until she lost the will to fight
    When I finally got home
    I walk in the door
    I call her name; no answer
    That's never happened before
    The house is quiet
    And I'm openin' each door
    There's a noise down the hall
    Like a chair hit the floor
    I run toward the bedroom
    And the sound of the banging
    Where I finally find her
    Dead, from apparent hanging

    I've been a liar, been a thief
    Been a lover, been a cheat
    All my sins need holy water, feel it washing over me
    Well, little one, I don't want to admit to something
    If all it's gonna cause is pain
    Truth and my lies right now are falling like the rain
    So let the river run

    I know
    That I
    Hurt her
    I know
    This is
    Murder

    I've got her blood on my hands
    But no charges were pressed
    I even helped dig the land
    Where we would lay her to rest
    People tell me it's my fault
    And yeah, I know they're right
    I can't even argue
    The story's black and white
    Cut and dry, case closed
    I did it, I killed her
    And this blood on my hands?
    It's all that's left from the murder
    I can't wash it off, oh god,
    What have I done?
    The demons inside me, they possessed me
    They won.
    Sometimes I hear her voice
    Callin' out from the shadows
    Screamin' from past fights, and long lost battles
    I'm a murderer
    And the guilt is like shackles

    I've been a liar, been a thief
    Been a lover, been a cheat
    All my sins need holy water, feel it washing over me
    Well, little one, I don't want to admit to something
    If all it's gonna cause is pain
    Truth and my lies right now are falling like the rain
    So let the river run
     
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  2. Copper
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    Feb 17, 2018
    I updated the OP with the finished version of the song.
     
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    Feb 17, 2018
    1 play crien
     
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    Miss me with that gay s---.
     
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    Feb 18, 2018
    >gay
    >literally about abusing a female spouse so bad she kills herself
    >lmao ok
     
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    Issa meme tho, relax
     
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    Feb 18, 2018
    sorry bro lmao

    poe's law
     
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    Xmipod "Sorry uncle xmi"

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    You aint really wild youre a tourist
     
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    :emoji_pray:
     
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    Too much edge for me
     
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