Sleepyhead Crazyhead Thread

Started by Pizza Hut, Dec 2, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Pizza Hut
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    Pizza Hut

    Sleepyhead Crazyhead

    Dec 2, 2018
    i dont think ive ever shared music here before but i decided to put this out today, curious what you guys think and im looking to actually make a good album next year with this type of sound so if you wanna give me some feedback id be happy to listen



    I just wish I could call you, cuz the feeling hearing your voice gives me,
    Is more giddy than I let it off to be, I awfully enjoy speaking,
    I can talk to you to avoid feelings, and avoid feeling like shit for the moment,
    And feel a void filling and of course silly, that's all you,
    And you promised, insisted actually, you said that if I'm sad and feel depressed in agony,
    Or feeling that in need of someone I can vent to, that you'd be a friend to latch to,
    Even text you as you sleep, in attempt to spam and free you from your slumber,
    And you'll hit me back immediately, to fix my sanity,
    And you'll never know how much I appreciate that, but the fact is,
    You've been so hard on yourself lately and the last very thing I wan' add,
    Is another opportunity to feel bad cuz you wake up to three hundred snaps,
    From me being dramatic and having you think that you're trash,
    Just because you couldn't be there to answer, so skip that tune,
    We're not gonna worry tonight, look at that moon and remember your purpose in life,
    I'm sure I'll be fine, i just need to be certain you find time to put yourself first,
    In your mind, cuz I know it's not easy following your dreams,
    When you're feeling worthless inside, and I'm not tryna sound too early or like,
    Pressure it, but ever since I've met you and we've been getting to be better friends,
    I've accepted that my feelings for you are evident, and I see you starting to question it,
    Cuz we've never met, and I know that but the day we meet,
    And you come down from Oregon to get to Maine for me,
    And we're both sure that we want each other to the same degree,
    Everything's gonna start to feel like it's one amazing dream,
    And I'll make it a point for you that we do it all from A to Z,
    The first thing I wanna do with you is go to the great city,
    And I'll have a license so we can drive up and just raid the streets,
    And we can argue about whose Portland's better, what state, what scene,
    And taking nothing serious the way we have our fun, play and tease,
    And if we do get lost together and stay up late till three,
    I'll bring you home and carry you to bed so we can love-make in peace,
    And stay up for as long as each other wants, but may we sleep,
    When the sun goes down I'll make sure that the blankets reach,
    And you can have em all as long as my Bug's safe with me,
    And well sleep the soundest we've ever slept and when I'm awakening,
    I'll be the happiest man alive, that is the place to be, but baby please...

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Copper
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    Copper

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    Dec 3, 2018
    Pretty dope, dude! Love the continuous rhyme scheme toward the end, really good shit.

    Keep it up!
     
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    prettysweet

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    Dec 4, 2018
    i like it, i really do. flow is tight, really clearly enunciated and mixed decently. the lyrics are somewhat derivative but interestiing and personal enough to keep the listening interesting. the only issue i have is with the delivery, a little more certainty/aggression (idk how else to describe it) would go a long way, look into finishing sentences with a downward inflection instead of upwards, and maybe exaggerating the emotion of each line in your voice, i imagine it would go a long way. personal opinion, however.

    all in all this is a good track with a lot of potential
     
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    Pizza Hut

    Sleepyhead Crazyhead

    Dec 4, 2018
    thanks for the feedback man, i wanted the delivery to sound close to talking to keep it more genuine but ill def try different things out in other songs
     
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    Pizza Hut

    Sleepyhead Crazyhead

    Jul 30, 2019
    @Rick @Rick @YNW Squiddy @joeyp363 @Zeugma @JB21 @Kor Seg El @ArchitectOfDestruction @JayDougMusic @prettysweet @Username tagging everyone from the lil privilege thread

    i welcome you to my actual music under the alias Sleepyhead Crazyhead, im usually much more rap oriented so this might not be the best representation of my music but if you like it, hey, and if not, you should scroll up and try the first one



    i know this is very aesthetic-y
     
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  6. Rick
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    Rick

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    Jul 30, 2019
    If paradise was a song, this is it. Beautiful :wow2:
     
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    Pizza Hut

    Sleepyhead Crazyhead

    Jul 30, 2019
    damn i hope you aint foolin me rick :sad1:
     
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    Rick

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    I'm not foolin, shit's nice, even my coworker said it's dope
     
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    Pizza Hut

    Sleepyhead Crazyhead

    Jul 30, 2019
    got your whole office cryin rick whatchu doin :hard:
     
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    Sleepyhead Crazyhead

    Jul 30, 2019
    best promoter ive had tho hands down
     
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    Tyler F u c k i n g Waves

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    This song is the reason Pizza Hut is shutting down
     
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