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Sleepyhead Crazyhead Thread

Started by Lot Now Available, Dec 2, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Lot Now Available
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Dec 2, 2018
    i dont think ive ever shared music here before but i decided to put this out today, curious what you guys think and im looking to actually make a good album next year with this type of sound so if you wanna give me some feedback id be happy to listen



    I just wish I could call you, cuz the feeling hearing your voice gives me,
    Is more giddy than I let it off to be, I awfully enjoy speaking,
    I can talk to you to avoid feelings, and avoid feeling like shit for the moment,
    And feel a void filling and of course silly, that's all you,
    And you promised, insisted actually, you said that if I'm sad and feel depressed in agony,
    Or feeling that in need of someone I can vent to, that you'd be a friend to latch to,
    Even text you as you sleep, in attempt to spam and free you from your slumber,
    And you'll hit me back immediately, to fix my sanity,
    And you'll never know how much I appreciate that, but the fact is,
    You've been so hard on yourself lately and the last very thing I wan' add,
    Is another opportunity to feel bad cuz you wake up to three hundred snaps,
    From me being dramatic and having you think that you're trash,
    Just because you couldn't be there to answer, so skip that tune,
    We're not gonna worry tonight, look at that moon and remember your purpose in life,
    I'm sure I'll be fine, i just need to be certain you find time to put yourself first,
    In your mind, cuz I know it's not easy following your dreams,
    When you're feeling worthless inside, and I'm not tryna sound too early or like,
    Pressure it, but ever since I've met you and we've been getting to be better friends,
    I've accepted that my feelings for you are evident, and I see you starting to question it,
    Cuz we've never met, and I know that but the day we meet,
    And you come down from Oregon to get to Maine for me,
    And we're both sure that we want each other to the same degree,
    Everything's gonna start to feel like it's one amazing dream,
    And I'll make it a point for you that we do it all from A to Z,
    The first thing I wanna do with you is go to the great city,
    And I'll have a license so we can drive up and just raid the streets,
    And we can argue about whose Portland's better, what state, what scene,
    And taking nothing serious the way we have our fun, play and tease,
    And if we do get lost together and stay up late till three,
    I'll bring you home and carry you to bed so we can love-make in peace,
    And stay up for as long as each other wants, but may we sleep,
    When the sun goes down I'll make sure that the blankets reach,
    And you can have em all as long as my Bug's safe with me,
    And well sleep the soundest we've ever slept and when I'm awakening,
    I'll be the happiest man alive, that is the place to be, but baby please...

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Copper
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    Copper

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    Dec 3, 2018
    Pretty dope, dude! Love the continuous rhyme scheme toward the end, really good shit.

    Keep it up!
     
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    prettysweet

    https://soundcloud.com/prettysweetprettysweet

    Dec 4, 2018
    i like it, i really do. flow is tight, really clearly enunciated and mixed decently. the lyrics are somewhat derivative but interestiing and personal enough to keep the listening interesting. the only issue i have is with the delivery, a little more certainty/aggression (idk how else to describe it) would go a long way, look into finishing sentences with a downward inflection instead of upwards, and maybe exaggerating the emotion of each line in your voice, i imagine it would go a long way. personal opinion, however.

    all in all this is a good track with a lot of potential
     
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Dec 4, 2018
    thanks for the feedback man, i wanted the delivery to sound close to talking to keep it more genuine but ill def try different things out in other songs
     
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Jul 30, 2019
    @Rick @Rick @YNW Squiddy @joeyp363 @Zeugma @JB21 @Kor Seg El @ArchitectOfDestruction @JayDougMusic @prettysweet @Username tagging everyone from the lil privilege thread

    i welcome you to my actual music under the alias Sleepyhead Crazyhead, im usually much more rap oriented so this might not be the best representation of my music but if you like it, hey, and if not, you should scroll up and try the first one



    i know this is very aesthetic-y
     
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  6. Rick James
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    Rick James

    ALFREDO

    Jul 30, 2019
    If paradise was a song, this is it. Beautiful :wow2:
     
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Jul 30, 2019
    damn i hope you aint foolin me rick :sad1:
     
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    Rick James

    ALFREDO

    Jul 30, 2019
    I'm not foolin, shit's nice, even my coworker said it's dope
     
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Jul 30, 2019
    got your whole office cryin rick whatchu doin :hard:
     
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Jul 30, 2019
    best promoter ive had tho hands down
     
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    Tyler F u c k i n g Waves

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    Aug 8, 2019
    This song is the reason Pizza Hut is shutting down
     
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  12. Lot Now Available
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Mar 27, 2020
    @CreativeSXN since @Rick getting everyone together for the quarantine mixtape i thought itd be a good time to share some new music with yall so you know who youre working with!

    i dont have any experience in mixing or mastering so i got two demos i recorded a few weeks ago, a feature for my friends album (BUTTAH GOD$) and a verse off my album that im waiting for a friend to get a verse back from (Poser)



    (Verse 3: Sleepyhead Crazyhead)
    Yeah, Jonnie pulled up tonight with some donkey butter,
    We was in the car just bumping beats,
    And we started puffing the weed that he offered up,
    I said I’ve never coughed so much, I started huffing and wheezing,
    We starlit just like the ceiling and constellation interior,
    But I rolled down the window and I got it out of my system yeah,
    The same time as Jonnie’s system,
    Sometimes it doesn’t matter how hard you hit em,
    Give em as long as a minute before they come back down,
    No hard decision, pause and listen, not a diss cuz I’m busy,
    But nod to this while I’m learning Japanese on all you bitches,
    I need some new competition cuz Em’s already bodied English,
    It’s just a carcass sitting there so I’m a culture vulture,
    But not in the way they’re known for, like all of you are probably thinking,
    I’m not a leech, I’m here to pick up all of the pieces,
    Just think of me more like a modified Jesus,
    Compared to all of these D-lists that fall in the breeze cuz they’re D-less,
    And I just eat em cuz they’re delish, with a lil lisp, yeah,
    That’s just what the deal ish, Moon Language dropping June 19th bitch,
    Then it’s onto bigger waves like a lunar eclipse,
    That could be the day you meet your fate,
    So clean your slate before it seems too late, cuz if we debate I’m winning,
    Piece of cake, and not to speak no names, I’m not lactose intolerant,
    But dare he be at utter odds with me, he’s insane, I’m a…



    (Verse 1: Sleepyhead Crazyhead)
    Yeah, you maggots think you ill cuz you get paper, but you don’t get me,
    And I’m flyer which is interesting cuz I’m tired,
    And you’ve been handed shit for as long as I can remember,
    How ironic that you missing punches, god this tempers supersonic,
    Said you can get this if you want it (if you want it), yeah,
    Think you got it cut out for yourself but you’re just cookie cutter,
    You remind me of cake you motherfucker, but not in the way you’d wanna,
    Cuz you remind me of cake ingredients (greedy ants),
    Cuz you’re bound to end up with some eggs (aches), battered,
    Plus the butter (plus butthurt), yeah, static picks up,
    And then I treat the old television as if I had a mistress,
    I just hit it on the side and make it work, that’s some pimp shit,
    Having threesomes with wifey always gon end in our satisfaction,
    Meanwhile any girl ever having to f--k you is the saddest fiction,
    That’s the difference, nobody fucks with you so lemme get it past your thick head,
    You’re never gonna rap for a living, especially when you’re that inconsistent,
    We are enemies and that is a given, and you already fit the fag definition,
    So you bet I didn’t have no suspicion catching you dressed up at the pad like a hipster…

    (Refrain 1: Sleepyhead Crazyhead)
    Nothing but a poser, and not to expose you, but you’ve been on my sofa,
    And I’m glad you’ll never put a song out, this world won’t ever know you…
     
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  13. FiveOh1
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    Mar 28, 2020
    Yooo that second one is fantastic.
    When you gone lemme get that Pizza Hut feature
     
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  14. Lot Now Available
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    Lot Now Available

    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Mar 28, 2020
    word man, lets see what happens with this quarantine mixtape :daps:
     
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  15. Rick James
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    Rick James

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    Mar 28, 2020
    I'm about to drop a verse or 5... I need that Pizza Hut verse on my song
     
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    Formerly Pizza Hut

    Mar 28, 2020
    you got it, my dms are open for beats (trap preferred but not needed) :emoji_pray:
     
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    Rick James

    ALFREDO

    Mar 28, 2020
    I'll send you a few, but it's more like a mix of trap and that raw Hip-Hop sound, I hope you'll like it
     
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