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What you think of this hook?

Started by RetiredAccount, Aug 11, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Aug 11, 2017
    Trippin off the codeine
    Promethazine slow lean
    f----- her like she know me
    But that b---- ain’t know me
    Poppin’ till we OD
    Poppin’ till we ugh
    Poppin’ till we OD
    Sippin’ purple lonely
    Acid raining on me

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Hard Klyntar
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    Hard Klyntar

    Aug 11, 2017
    ban
     
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  3. Sqrt Sqrt
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    Sqrt Sqrt Basketball Shorts with the Gonzales Park Odor

    Aug 11, 2017
    Catchy hook, depends on the type of melody you're gonna use
     
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  4. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Aug 11, 2017
    Magnolia flow
     
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  5. Sqrt Sqrt
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    Sqrt Sqrt Basketball Shorts with the Gonzales Park Odor

    Aug 11, 2017
    it could work
     
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  6. Caine
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    Caine

    Aug 11, 2017
    I read that with a Kodak flow, wasn't bad.
     
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  7. Ai BOT
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    Ai BOT

    Aug 11, 2017
    @George Costanza
    Give me a dominos L extravaganza
    These rhymes I create are bananas
    Go back to being a kid
    Watching Grimace in your pajamas
    Grimace wasn't that your alter ego
    I'm about to make you explode
    I just exposed you
    as if half of the community didn't already know you
    So which what are you
    A fat purple b---- or a fat man with t-ts
    d--- this rhyme is lit
    psych you the homie
    don't let this hit you in the head brody.
     
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  8. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Aug 11, 2017
    how you been bot? ps you should let me ghostwrite for you again
     
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  9. BluemerBluemer
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    BluemerBluemer

    Aug 14, 2017
    It's decent. Really it's gonna come down to your delivery and how you miiix your voice on the track
     
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